The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010.

The line graph illustrates information about the changing share

price

of Outokumpu companies in euros over a period of nearly five years starting from June 2006 until Dec 2010. First of all, of all, the

price

has

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reached

the

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a

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peak

in

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at

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around the end of 2006. It was nearly Eur 33. There was a fluctuation during the

year

2007. At the start of the

year

2008, the

price

has

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increased steadily to reach 30 Eur after that the

price

has

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dropped dramatically to reach the lowest point

less

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of less

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than 10 Eur

at the end

of 2008. There was a

a

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apply

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slight

recovering

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recovery

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in 2009. In 2010, the

price

remained

fluctuating

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fluctuated

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with a gradual rise in the middle of the

year

followed by a steady decline

at the end

of the

year

. In conclusion, there was a fluctuation and a decrease almost in the share

price

of Outokumpu companies in euros almost every

year

,

its

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it

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only significantly rose twice during the whole five years.