Should not force children to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree with the statement.

Schools are
good source
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a good source
of learning varied languages. Based on the difficulties and stress
educatees
give an education to
educates
undergo in learning foreign languages
,
Accept space
,
many opine that school should restrict teaching other languages to children.
However
, I completely disagree with
this
belief and will justify my opinion in
ensuing paragraphs
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the ensuing paragraphs
.
To begin
with, being multilingual enhances children's future education and career perspectives by
openning
first or beginning
opening
the door of other Nations for them; offering better education and employment opportunities. Germany,
for
instance offers
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instance, offers
free
education
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educational
facilities to young aspirants, possessing certified learning skills in German
language
.
Moreover
, attaining a good job is
ultimate purpose
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the ultimate purpose
of every child and many international companies prefers speakers of multiple
language
over monolinguals as employees.
Hence
, learning foreign languages gives ample of benefits to learners, latest ages.
In addition
to
this
, children who
speaks
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speak
more than one
language
develops better learning skills. An experiment was conducted by
child development unit
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the child development unit
at Cambridge University over two groups of students,
comparining
the act of examining resemblances
comparing
learning abilities of monolingual's and multiple
language
speakers. The result of experiment affirms that
multilinguals
using or knowing more than one language
multilingual
possess better learning and their retaining capacity is
also
high.
Hence
, school teaching more than one
language
are certainly creating
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is certainly creating
better
clain
group of people related by blood or marriage
clan
claim
slaying
of children possessing high-level psychological traits. To conclude, it is evident that learning more languages at early stages of life might be a difficult process,
however
,
this
process shows better results in later and peculiar stages of life.
Thus
,
school
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schools
the school
should make students
to learn
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learn
languages other than their mother tongue.
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