With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitat and some are even threatened to the point of extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What measures can be taken to deal with this problem?

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The different kind

of animals have become in threat and few are even reached to the point of completely vanishing, owing to the forest’s destruction, urbanization and non-regulated hunting. I think their safety is crucial and there are certain option to mitigate

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issue. Animal’s protection is quite necessary for the human beings in terms of food.

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is because people utilized animal’s

meat

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in their daily living. In almost all the countries in the world, animals

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as cows and goats are used to acquire

meat

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from them. Nomadic people in Russia, who live in the

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North-Pole

,

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, solely depend on goats and buffalos for eating

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purposes

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, it is of paramount importance to safe the animal species, so that people could acquire

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for eating.

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, there are certain ways of stopping animals to become extinct.

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, deforestation in different countries ought to be

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discouraged

. Forests in the

country side

rural regions

countryside

are usually the living places or homes of many

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kinds

of animals;

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,

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the destruction

of those forests in the form of cutting trees means destroying their surrounding’s or living areas.

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, the growing speed of urbanization should be restricted, as it is having serious consequences on wild livings.

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, the infrastructure development in the rural areas is enormously resulting in the vanishing of the forests;

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a detrimental outcome on the lives of animals.

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, preventing the

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downfall

of forests and not encouraging or supporting urban growth

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is

crucial in stopping

animal’s extinction

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the animal’s extinction

. In conclusion, forest’s destruction, urban development and illegal hunting are the reasons of

animal’s disappearance

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the animal’s disappearance

. I believe,

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of them or themselves

their

existence is propitious, as humans get their

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for food, and restricting

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trees, cutting

and the urbanization are options to cope with

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problem.