With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitat and some are even threatened to the point of extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What measures can be taken to deal with this problem?

Different kind
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The different kind
of animals have become in threat and few are even reached to the point of completely vanishing, owing to the forest’s destruction, urbanization and non-regulated hunting. I think their safety is crucial and there are certain option to mitigate
this
issue. Animal’s protection is quite necessary for the human beings in terms of food.
This
is because people utilized animal’s
meat
in their daily living. In almost all the countries in the world, animals
such
as cows and goats are used to acquire
meat
from them. Nomadic people in Russia, who live in the
north-pole
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North-Pole
,
for instance
, solely depend on goats and buffalos for eating
purpose
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purposes
.
Thus
, it is of paramount importance to safe the animal species, so that people could acquire
meat
for eating.
On the other hand
, there are certain ways of stopping animals to become extinct.
Firstly
, deforestation in different countries ought to be
discourage
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discouraged
. Forests in the
country side
rural regions
countryside
are usually the living places or homes of many
kind
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kinds
of animals;
consequently
,
destruction
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the destruction
of those forests in the form of cutting trees means destroying their surrounding’s or living areas.
Secondly
, the growing speed of urbanization should be restricted, as it is having serious consequences on wild livings.
For example
, the infrastructure development in the rural areas is enormously resulting in the vanishing of the forests;
hence
a detrimental outcome on the lives of animals.
Therefore
, preventing the
down fall
failure that results in a loss of position or reputation
downfall
of forests and not encouraging or supporting urban growth
are
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is
crucial in stopping
animal’s extinction
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the animal’s extinction
. In conclusion, forest’s destruction, urban development and illegal hunting are the reasons of
animal’s disappearance
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the animal’s disappearance
. I believe,
there
of them or themselves
their
existence is propitious, as humans get their
meat
for food, and restricting
trees cutting
Accept comma addition
trees, cutting
and the urbanization are options to cope with
this
problem.
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