People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems? Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Despite the
megacities
that has hundrds
of millions of people living in, being ten more than ninety
hundreds
hundred
such
as Beijing and New York, urban cities as a whole has defects that are giving people a hard time to live in. Problems like traffic jam, or air pollutions are hard to ignore. On the other hard, government definetely
should play a role without question and beyond doubt
definitely
on
encouraging Suggestion
in
adjecent
inhabiting nearest in space or position; immediately adjoining without intervening space
adjacent
life-styles
.
There are just too many a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyles
car
running on the road that slows down the traffics in the cities everyday. On average, American Suggestion
cars
housholds
occupy 2.5 cars, which explains why 9:00 every morning in New York city, there is always somewhere that’s traffic jammed. More a social unit living together
households
also
, people often got late for work simply they were stuck on their roads to work.
Another problem for people who lives in large cities is the air conditions. As we already knew, large infustructures
are needed in order to supplement large cities, there will be energy the basic structure or features of a system or organization
infrastructures
power house
, water processing factories, and waste elimination factories. Those factories will have to use certain a highly energetic and indefatigable person
powerhouse
machanical
using (or as if using) mechanisms or tools or devices
mechanical
mechnisim
that will a light silver-white ductile bivalent metallic element; in pure form it burns with brilliant white flame; occurs naturally only in combination (as in magnesite and dolomite and carnallite and spinel and olivine)
magnesium
eventally
produce emissions that could be harmful to people, and for those who lives in the large city will get caught in their daily life.
As the government, they should create incentive policies that after an unspecified period of time or an especially long delay
eventually
makes
living outside of urban city more Suggestion
make
appealling
to citizens. able to attract interest or draw favorable attention
appealing
For example
, the government can offer benefical program
that helps people who wants to buy houses in regional towns. Suggestion
a beneficial program
beneficial program
Thus
, people will find the new living life-style
more Accept comma addition
living, lifestyle
living lifestyle
living lifestyles
appealling
to them.
In conclusion, those citizens who able to attract interest or draw favorable attention
appealing
lives
in large Suggestion
live
cites
have problems with traffic jam and air pollution that trouble their daily life. a large and densely populated urban area; may include several independent administrative districts
cities
However
, governments should have well designed policies, or programs that helps
people to make the decision of living in Suggestion
help
adjecent
region more easy to choose.
nearest in space or position; immediately adjoining without intervening space
adjacent
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