More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The increasing number of people who had made their minds to
postbone
to have children than previous generations had hold back to a later time
postpone
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became
so due to the increasing pressure of Suggestion
become
work loads
that work that a person is expected to do in a specified time
workloads
corperations
lay on them as employees. Of course, to raise a child with better financial conditions is an obvious advantage, but that’s not going to win the a business firm whose articles of incorporation have been approved in some state
corporations
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English clergyman and brother of John Wesley who wrote many hymns (1707-1788)
Wesley
aginst
the greedy desire of wanting for more, which is a human nature.
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against
labor
market year after year, generation after generation, the very idea that one must to a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
suceed
as soon as possible is reinforced by the vast media exposing people like Mark Zagerbug and Bill attain success or reach a desired goal
succeed
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Gates, who
high point
in life at Suggestion
a high point
young age
, for which people nurture their world view Suggestion
a young age
the young age
torwards
the importance of working is far near
towards
toward
urgent
than raising a child. One can be Suggestion
more urgent
protried
as an investment for the future, another one can be extend out or project in space
protruded
seem
as a trap set for a boring life.
The advantage and disadvantage of those world views effects on people’s decision on when they will have children are clear. On the one hand, people will be more perceive by sight or have the power to perceive by sight
seen
competant financially
to raise kids, as if they were 20 years ago when they just start Accept comma addition
competent, financially
competent financially
accumlating
money. In fact, in 20 years, some people may get or gather together
accumulating
had
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have
brough
a house and have take something or somebody with oneself somewhere
brought
decent amount
of savings that can raise a child and not to worry about all kinds of extra expenses. Suggestion
a decent amount
On the other hand
, the disadvantage is that people may choose to not to have children at all, because the current Linking Words
life-style
fits their expectations a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
perfectely
, for any extra person added into the relationship may not be something they want, simply because the extra expenses they will face by having the children may need them to completely and without qualification; used informally as intensifiers
perfectly
down grade
their current rate lower; lower in value or esteem
downgrade
life-styles
. I think disadvantage will out-win advantage simple because human nature is hard to beat.
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyles
lifestyle
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