You have recently flown to another country on a business trip. You were satisfied with flight , but didn’t like services at the airport. Write a letter to the airport manager and say Give your flight details Why were you disappointed Suggest some improvements to the airport services

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Dear sir I have

traveled

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from India to Singapore on

5th

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the 5th

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of may through

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an Air

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Asia flight for a board meeting in a

multi national

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company. My flight number was KL3254. I would like to appreciate all

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flight services;

however

, I faced a few problems

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the airport. While I was about to check out, a security person stopped me and asked the purpose of my visit and I respond

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the questions appropriately and honestly. In spite I had all the relevant documents with me and shown to that officer still he asked

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of irrelevant questions to me. In all these

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he has wasted approximately two precious hours and I became late for that meeting. Airport authorities should make an appropriate checking system and follow the right path so that passengers will never face

such

issues on checkout and

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. I hope that you will improve your services and I will not face

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problem in future.

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Your

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sincerely Minty

kaushal

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0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

166 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You have recently flown to another country on a business trip. You were satisfied with flight , but didn’t like services at the airport. Write a letter to the airport manager and say Give your flight details Why were you disappointed Suggest some improvements to the airport services

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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