You have recently flown to another country on a business trip. You were satisfied with flight , but didn’t like services at the airport. Write a letter to the airport manager and say Give your flight details Why were you disappointed Suggest some improvements to the airport services

Dear sir I have
traveled
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travelled

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from India to Singapore on
5th
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the 5th

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of may through
Air
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an Air

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Asia flight for a board meeting in a
multi national
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multinational

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company. My flight number was KL3254. I would like to appreciate all
you
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your

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flight services;
however
, I faced a few problems
on
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at

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the airport. While I was about to check out, a security person stopped me and asked the purpose of my visit and I respond
all
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to all

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the questions appropriately and honestly. In spite I had all the relevant documents with me and shown to that officer still he asked
number
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a number
the number

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of irrelevant questions to me. In all these
checking
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checkings

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he has wasted approximately two precious hours and I became late for that meeting. Airport authorities should make an appropriate checking system and follow the right path so that passengers will never face
such
issues on checkout and
check ins
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check-ins

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. I hope that you will improve your services and I will not face
this
problem in future.
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Yours

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Your
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sincerely Minty
kaushal
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Kaushal

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