Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Every
country
is growing day by day and everyone prefers those countries which have a plethora of facilities. Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world and nowadays, it is easy to access every item in each
country
. To embark, I believe that it gives a positive impact or development because people are able to get their desirable items very easily without any barrier, they can get whatever and wherever they want,
for example
, a few days ago, one of my south
indian
a member of the race of people living in America when Europeans arrived
Indian
friend
Suggestion
friends
, he visited me and want to eat 'Dosa' which is a special and traditional dish in the south, by a single search through the internet on my mobile, I found the specialized available
restaurent
a building where people go to eat
restaurant
restaurants
restraint
of that food and ordered it for the dinner and made him propitiated.
This
clearly shows that due to
gloabalised
make world-wide in scope or application
globalised
globalized
world, everything is possible and accessible.
Similarly
,
this
development creates a positive impact on our society,
for instance
, Apple iphone, it made in America, assembled in China and available throughout all over the world,
moreover
, technical staff for the repair and maintenence are available in every
country
,
furthermore
, it helps in the reduction of unemployment and it is contributing to strengthen the economy of the states,
in addition
to, if we take an example of clothes, shooes, watches, cars and other plenty of things of different brands of different countries so we can notice that anyone can purchase the international brands from their home
country
.
In contrast
, it may be some negative effects
also
, globalisation causes loss of cultures and diversities of many
countries but
Accept comma addition
countries, but
taking the advantages in view, we have to accept
this
modernisation. To conclude, globalisation and similar way of life in different countries made life more
luxuries
displaying luxury and furnishing gratification to the senses
luxurious
and comfortable than in the
past so
Accept comma addition
past, so
this
phenomenon should be accepted by many people among countries.
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