Most people accept that we now live in a globalised world but not everyone agrees that this is beneficial. To what extent is globalization a positive or negative development?

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Globalization means interaction and integration among people, companies, and governments worldwide. It is commonly believed by many that we live in

a globalized world but

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a globalized world, but

some people believe that it is not advantageous to us.

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, I believe that to a great extent, it is a positive

development

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and to

lesser extent

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a lesser extent

it has some negative impacts.

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with positive developments, Globalization has increased the job opportunities for young generations.

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multinational companies give us the opportunity to navigate different countries around the globe.

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This, further

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, helps in exchanging the culture and traditions

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different countries.

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, foreigners working in

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the USA

must be aware that Christmas and Halloween are the famous festival of US citizens and

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outsiders who work in India knows that Diwali is the national festival of the country. Through globalization, foreign companies contribute to the country’s gross income.

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it helps in the

development

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of countries.

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, the famous Japanese mobile company had recently launched its division in India,

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it will benefit India right from construction till it starts earning revenue. Let us discuss some negative

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factors, one of the major negative impact globalization is

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to smaller businessmen’s or local companies. Since everyone wants to work in multi-national company because of better opportunities and facilities, due to

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sometimes smaller business faces closure. In conclusion, there are few negative impacts of

globalization

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globalization, such

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as loss of business to local businessmen’s but it has more positive developments

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as, more employment opportunities exchange of culture and traditions. Along with that, it contributes a lot towards country

development

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Most people accept that we now live in a globalised world but not everyone agrees that this is beneficial. To what extent is globalization a positive or negative development?

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In many countries, people decide to have children at a later age than in the past. Why? Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many museums charge admission fees while others are free. Do the advantages of charging people to visit a museum outweigh the disadvantages?