Government investment in the arts, such as music and theater, is a waste of money, government must investment this money in public services. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Economic development is the main concern of every government and it is believed by some people that authorities should not waste the
money
on arts like
music
and
theater but
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theatre, but
theatre but
instead
should allocate that
money
to public services and according to my
opinion both
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opinion, both
aspects are essential for the overall development of the
society
but government should invest
huge amount
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a huge amount
huge amounts
in health care, education and other public utilities. Main aim of government is to provide good living standard to its citizen like education, health care facilities, public
aminities
things that make you comfortable and at ease
amenities
and infrastructure and investing
this
money
in
music
and
theater
a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
theatre
does not help in solving the urgent problems of the
society
, so
accordingly
major chunk of amount should be put into public sector to help build the necessary infrastructure like schools and hospitals and provide people with job opportunities and eradicate problems like unemployment and poverty and
music
and drama should be pursued more as
an
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a
hobby.
However
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However, on
on the other hand
, it is seen that arts like
music
and
theater
a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
theatre
helps in maintaining the culture and heritage of the
country
and have many advantages
firstly
people are united through
music
and drama which builds
the strong and cooperative
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a stronger and cooperative society
stronger and cooperative society
society
,
secondly
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secondly, music
music
and
theater
a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
theatre
sector is an asset to an economy as it creates ample of job opportunities for its people and attract tourist
.
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.
for
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For
example –in
recent survey
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a recent survey
the recent survey
by leading magazine it was stated that developed
country
which have invested and build their art and
theater
a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
theatre
industry have generated 57%
of more revenue through
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more revenue through
tourism, as it attracts people towards unique art and culture heritage of that
country
. To conclude, according to me both the aspect art (
music
/
theater
a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
theatre
) and public services are important for the overall growth of the
society
and
country
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the country
cannot develop in the absence of any one of it, both should go hand in hand but huge amount of
money
should be allocated towards the public services like building infrastructure, school, hospitals etc.
to
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To
provide people with high living standard.
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