Government investment in the arts, such as music and theater, is a waste of money, government must investment this money in public services. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Economic development is the main concern of every government and it is believed by some people that authorities should not waste the

money

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on arts like

music

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and

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theater but

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theatre, but

theatre but

instead

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should allocate that

money

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to public services and according to my

opinion both

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opinion, both

aspects are essential for the overall development of the

society

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but government should invest

huge amount

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a huge amount

huge amounts

in health care, education and other public utilities. Main aim of government is to provide good living standard to its citizen like education, health care facilities, public

aminities

things that make you comfortable and at ease

amenities

and infrastructure and investing

this

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money

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in

music

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and

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theater

a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented

theatre

does not help in solving the urgent problems of the

society

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, so

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major chunk of amount should be put into public sector to help build the necessary infrastructure like schools and hospitals and provide people with job opportunities and eradicate problems like unemployment and poverty and

music

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and drama should be pursued more as

an

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a

hobby.

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However

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However, on

on the other hand

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, it is seen that arts like

music

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and

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theater

a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented

theatre

helps in maintaining the culture and heritage of the

country

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and have many advantages

firstly

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people are united through

music

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and drama which builds

the strong and cooperative

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a stronger and cooperative society

stronger and cooperative society

society

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,

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secondly

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secondly, music

music

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and

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theater

a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented

theatre

sector is an asset to an economy as it creates ample of job opportunities for its people and attract tourist

.

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for

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For

example –in

recent survey

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a recent survey

the recent survey

by leading magazine it was stated that developed

country

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which have invested and build their art and

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theater

a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented

theatre

industry have generated 57%

of more revenue through

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more revenue through

tourism, as it attracts people towards unique art and culture heritage of that

country

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. To conclude, according to me both the aspect art (

music

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/

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theater

a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented

theatre

) and public services are important for the overall growth of the

society

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and

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country

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the country

cannot develop in the absence of any one of it, both should go hand in hand but huge amount of

money

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should be allocated towards the public services like building infrastructure, school, hospitals etc.

to

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To

provide people with high living standard.