A friend has agreed to stay in your flat (apartment) and look after it while you are away. You want to give your friend some information about the flat. Write a letter to this freind. In your letter: · Give information about the flat · Provide any important instructions · Say what he/she should do if there are any problems

Dear Sara, I am glad that you agreed to stay back at my apartment

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I am going for my family vacation I would like to thank you for that.

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Further

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I would like to give

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details about the flat, as you will be visiting my place for the first time since I moved to

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apartment, the flat is situated in the prime location the metro station is at

walking

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distance just 400 meters from the apartment and

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moreover

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the flat is very spacious it is at the 9th floor so it contains terrace garden

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. In my absence please take care to give water to the plants

alternative

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day

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and most importantly I would like to tell you that please do not use the ac of

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room as there is some electric fault whenever the switch is on it sparks and the light of the whole flat turns off, so take care to avoid the hassle. And if there is any emergency or you need to contact me regarding anything I am giving you my alternative number below, please reach

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as my mobile no would

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off so as to avoid any business calls. Phone no- 2254845 Thanks once again for your help. All the Best Monika

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May 31, 2019

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

216 words

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