A friend has agreed to stay in your flat (apartment) and look after it while you are away. You want to give your friend some information about the flat. Write a letter to this freind. In your letter: · Give information about the flat · Provide any important instructions · Say what he/she should do if there are any problems
Dear Sara,
I am glad that you agreed to stay back at my apartment while I am going
for
my family vacation I would like to thank you for that. Change preposition
on
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Further
I would like to give few details about the flat, as you will be visiting my place for the Add a comma
,Further
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first
time since I moved to this
apartment, the flat is situated in the prime location the metro station is at walking
distance just 400 meters from the apartment and Add an article
a walking
The noun phrase walking distance seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
moreover
the flat is very spacious it is at the 9th floor so it contains terrace garden also
.
In my absence please take care to give water to the plants alternative day and most importantly I would like to tell you that please do not use the ac of master room as there is some electric fault whenever the switch is on it sparks and the light of the whole flat turns off, so take care to avoid the hassle.
And if there is any
emergency or you need to contact me regarding anything I am giving you my alternative number below, please reach to me at Correct your spelling
an
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this
as my mobile no would be switch off so as to avoid any business calls.
Phone no- 2254845
Thanks once again for your help.
All the Best
MonikaSubmitted by monikaojha14 on
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