A friend has agreed to stay in your flat (apartment) and look after it while you are away. You want to give your friend some information about the flat. Write a letter to this freind. In your letter: · Give information about the flat · Provide any important instructions · Say what he/she should do if there are any problems

Dear Sara, I am glad that you agreed to stay back at my apartment while I am going
for
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on

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my family vacation I would like to thank you for that.
Further
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,Further

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I would like to give few details about the flat, as you will be visiting my place for the
first
time since I moved to
this
apartment, the flat is situated in the prime location the metro station is at
walking
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a walking

The noun phrase walking distance seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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distance just 400 meters from the apartment and
moreover
the flat is very spacious it is at the 9th floor so it contains terrace garden
also
. In my absence please take care to give water to the plants alternative day and most importantly I would like to tell you that please do not use the ac of master room as there is some electric fault whenever the switch is on it sparks and the light of the whole flat turns off, so take care to avoid the hassle. And if there is
any
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an

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emergency or you need to contact me regarding anything I am giving you my alternative number below, please reach to me at
this
as my mobile no would be switch off so as to avoid any business calls. Phone no- 2254845 Thanks once again for your help. All the Best Monika
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