A friend has agreed to stay in your flat (apartment) and look after it while you are away. You want to give your friend some information about the flat. Write a letter to this freind. In your letter: · Give information about the flat · Provide any important instructions · Say what he/she should do if there are any problems
Dear Sara,
I am glad that you agreed to stay back at my apartment
while
I am going for my family vacation I would like to thank you for that. Further
I would like to give Add a comma
Further,
few
details about the flat, as you will be visiting my place for the first time since I moved to Correct article usage
a few
this
apartment, the flat is situated in the prime location the metro station is at walking
distance just 400 meters from the apartment and Add an article
a walking
moreover
the flat is very spacious it is at the 9th floor so it contains terrace garden Add a comma
moreover,
also
.
In my absence please take care to give water to the plants alternative
Change preposition
on alternative
day
and most importantly I would like to tell you that please do not use the ac of Fix the agreement mistake
days
master
room as there is some electric fault whenever the switch is on it sparks and the light of the whole flat turns off, so take care to avoid the hassle.
And if there is any emergency or you need to contact me regarding anything I am giving you my alternative number below, please reach Correct article usage
the master
to
me at Change preposition
out to
this
as my mobile no would be switch
off so as to avoid any business calls.
Phone no- 2254845
Thanks once again for your help.
All the Best
MonikaChange the verb form
be switched
be switching
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