The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society? How can this problem be solved?

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Nowadays,

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a large number

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of people have faced serious

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issues

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as diabetes and heart

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due to

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over weight

usually describes a large person who is fat but has a large frame to carry it

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it leads to other critical issues. In

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essay, I will examine the major causes of increased overweight people

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as laziness or love for fast

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, I will suggest some solutions including

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related awareness programs, healthy

diet

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that could solve

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to some extent.

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with, there are various reasons for the increased number of over heavy people in our society. One of the major reason is our laziness, in

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hi-tech world, we are blessed with plenty of robotic devices that had made us more lazy.

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, to no surprise, there are robotic vacuums, and even Siri and Alisa like smart devices who could even turn your television on or off just on your command. Another significant reason for the

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among young people poor

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. In

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busy lifestyle, we are so fond of junk

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, frozen meals and fast

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that unfortunately we ignored its negative impacts to our body. Let’s talk about some solution to

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problem

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. One of the easiest

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is to start the awareness program that

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discusses

the chronic

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issues due to

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and

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showcase the value of good

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. Another simple solution could be some cookery shows that teach how to cook healthy meals in quick time,

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in a busy lifestyle it could be possible to have

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a healthful diet

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If there is a will, there is a way.

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, a very famous Indian singer had loose 160 kg of weight just by controlling his

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so it is just about our will power and desire to attain

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a good physique

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is another famous proverb,

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is wealth, which depicts that we could enjoy every fruit of life only if our

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is good. In conclusion,

obesity

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is the root cause of many serious

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and there is an urgent need to reduce

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problem

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. The two primary reasons for

obesity

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are laziness and poor

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. We could mitigate

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issue by following some simple solutions

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health

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related awareness programs and choosing

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a nutritious diet

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over fast

food

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Topic Vocabulary:

obesity
sedentary
caloric intake
genetics
nutritional awareness
processed foods
fast food
lifestyle diseases
preventative measures
tax incentives
urban planning
community gardens
wellness initiatives
dietary guidelines
physical fitness
calorie-dense
portion control
metabolic rate
health literacy
food deserts
work-life balance
junk food
BMI (Body Mass Index)
non-communicable diseases
food labeling

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The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society? How can this problem be solved?

Your opinion

Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

Task 2: Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Environmental problems are too big for individuals countries and individual persons to address. In other words, we have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is at an international level. What is your opinion?