People have different job expectations for jobs. Some people prefer to do the same job for the same company, whereas others prefer to change jobs frequently. Write about the advantages and disadvantages of each viewpoint?

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In the modern workplace there is no longer the attitude that ‘a

job

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is for life’. Nowadays, many people take the option to change jobs, while others prefer not to. In my essay, I will explore the good and bad points of the above attitudes.

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of the main benefits of staying in

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job

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is security.

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The changing employer

often means a period of instability, where

one

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may have to think about moving house, or temporarily losing a steady source of income. Staying in

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job

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means these problems are avoided. Another benefit of not changing occupation is that

one

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is able to gain a lot of experience and expertise in his specific profession,

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enhancing

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security.

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’s company may recognize their loyalty and reward their service.

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, those who

often change

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often changes

jobs may be seen as unreliable, lacking in experience and employers might be reluctant to hire and

invest training in

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invest in training

them.

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, there are arguments in favour of changing

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frequently.

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is that a worker improves his employability. Working in several different jobs often means that the individual has more skills.

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people are seen as more dynamic and versatile. Another benefit of changing jobs

frequently is

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has frequently been

that

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never gets stuck in a rut. From my own experience, I got bored when I spent too long in a

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. Following

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, the quality of my work would suffer. I

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believe that employers generally don’t tend to greatly reward loyalty or commitment. Increased wages and promotion are often easier to attain by changing jobs. Overall, it can be said that the disadvantages of changing jobs are the advantages of staying put, and vice versa... In my opinion, I feel that changing jobs every once in a while is of

more benefit

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most benefit

Submitted by Serhii Baraniuk on Mon Jun 03 2019

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

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Relevant & specific examples

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299 words

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People have different job expectations for jobs. Some people prefer to do the same job for the same company, whereas others prefer to change jobs frequently. Write about the advantages and disadvantages of each viewpoint?

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In many cities, an increasing number of people do not know their neighbors and there is a lack of a sense of community. What are the causes of this problem? How can it be solved?

Whoever controls the media controls the mind. Discuss this statement and give your own opinion.

In many countries around the world,rural people are Moving to cities,so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Innovation is often driven by the pursuit of profit and economic growth. However, some argue that it should prioritize addressing social and environmental issues. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.