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Immigration has a major impact on society. What are the main reasons? What consequences it can lead?

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People migrating to other countries
has
Suggestion
have
 a great impact on society. While people who immigrate have their own reasons,
nevertheless
, immigration has its varied consequences.
To begin
 with, there are certain factors that force someone to leave their
country
 and settle in a foreign land.
Firstly
, the lack of employment in the home
country
 and good job opportunities abroad has been the number one cause of immigration.
For instance
, each year a large number of doctors are accepted as immigrants in the USA and Europe, because of advanced medical research facilities in these countries.
Secondly
, good living conditions attract some people to settle in a non-native
country
.
Such
 as some developed countries have free health care system, while some countries have poor.
However
, immigration has an impact on society. It not only affects the
country
 migrated to but
also
 their native
country
. It helps to improve the economy of the nation.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic migration
  • Asylum seeker
  • Diaspora
  • Expatriate
  • Refugee status
  • Work permit/visa
  • Demographic shift
  • Naturalization
  • Xenophobia
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Multiculturalism
  • Social cohesion
  • Immigration policies
  • Border control
  • Undocumented immigrants
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