It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and for society. Do you agree or disagree?

People often have different discussions over the age at which they should get married. Some assent to the belief that settling down before 30 is the best choice which is beneficial for

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individual as well as society.

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, I am more in

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idea stating

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idea, stating

that getting married should be

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over

30 to assure a mature mentality and a concrete financial status.

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of all, the mature

mentality including

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mentality, including

maturity in

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behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

and emotional control helps maintain relationships. There is a wide range of unavoidable problems that need to be

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palliated

by the cooperation of

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individuals. During that process, it is inevitable that

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would take place, increasing their anger.

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prevalent situation can be seen in the early stage of each marriage,

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is one of the reasons leading to separation among the youth. Most people who have struggled with the pressure from work and social life may have numerous experiences in dealing with

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disputes

and keeping

their

objective case of they

them

calm.

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, the age of over 30 is considered the most suitable when people have collected an adequate amount of experience as well as knowledge of how to keep the stability of their marriage.

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, the low economic level is another reason why people oppose the idea of getting married before 30. There is

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a wide range of expenses as living

cost

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costs

that matter to

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individuals. It is understandable that the bonding would loosen due to poverty if the financial ability is not strong enough. A long period of time working enthusiastically allows people to accumulate a sufficient amount of money which helps them prevent negative situations.

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, their work-life balance cannot be affected, which is the key point to a successful life. In conclusion, I firmly believe that the age of over 30 is suitable for most people to decide to get married, ensuring a long-lasting and stable marriage.