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Some people prefer to save money. Others prefer to use their money on things they will enjoy. What is the best approach towards money? Discuss both sides and give your opinion

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Money
 is
cosidered
carefully weighed
considered
 as the sixth sense without which one cannot enjoy other five, so some people like to keep it safe for
unpredicatble
not capable of being foretold
unpredictable
future
, while others willingly spend
money
 for their pleasure and enjoy
life
. There
exists
Suggestion
exist
 strong arguments for both sides, which implies it is worth
examinig
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
examining
examined
 both sides of the view before reaching any conclusion. The main reason why people like to save
money
 is to secure the
future
 of their family from unseen events. Over the
last
 decades,
money
 has become an important part of everyone’s
life
 and it has become near to impossible to do any task without it.
For instance
: A person with good savings would be able to withstand any kind of expenses incurred in any unfortunate event
on
Suggestion
with
 his family.
On the other hand
,
many people belief
Suggestion
the many peoples belief
many peoples belief
 that
this
 is the only
life
 they have got, and they should live it to the fullest, so they spend
money
 for their pleasure and passion.
This
 gives them happiness and ultimate satisfaction. As an example: if they have a passion of travelling to different places, they spend
money
 to explore the world.
This
 essay discussed that some people like to save
money
 to secure
future
, while others prefer to spend
money
 for happiness and satisfaction. In my opinion, having a
balance
Suggestion
balanced
 approach in between two of these is the essence of one’s
life
. As one needs to secure the
future
 as well as need
money
 to enjoy
life
 and follow one’s passion.
This
 kind of approach will lead to secure, happy and satisfied
life
.
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