Tests and examinations are a central feature of school systems in many countries. Do you think the educational benefits of testing outweigh any disadvantages?

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For many decades the educational system
have evaluated
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has evaluated
and classified
students
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students'
student
student's
achievements through various types of tests. Recent data
has challanged
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have challenged
has challenged
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paradigm and raised fundamental questions in regards to the classical structure through which
knowledge
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is evaluated. Performing a test at the end of an academic year has many potential benefits. Tests compare how well a student knows the required material in a relatively objective manner. Whether it is in the form of a written or an oral examination, all students eventually get a
numerative
a message that tells the particulars of an act or occurrence or course of events; presented in writing or drama or cinema or as a radio or television program
narrative
grade and their
knowledge
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is being compared to one another. If done on a state level, tests can
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compare specific schools and grade their educational capabilities.
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, tests help to set a minimal foundation block from which the educational system can build
uppon
in contact with, on top of
upon
in the
upcomming
of the relatively near future
upcoming
years.
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is especially important in exact sciences
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as biology and physics. Despite its well known and obvious advantages, publications have repeatedly shown that not all people respond
qually
to the same degree (often followed by 'as')
equally
calmly
to tests.
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, it is well known now know that not all students have the same ability to study under
stressfull
extremely irritating to the nerves
stressful
conditions, a fact that have direct consequences on the
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students'
student's
student
test results. Testing
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increase social competition between students and
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may have severe effects
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of
social isolation.
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, some
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a contestant that you are matched against
opponents
opponents'
opponent's
claim that a
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test, evaluate
knowledge
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that has been memorized and not truly learned and integrated.
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Throughout
my educational years I have been evaluated by oral and
writtent
set down in writing in any of various ways
written
exams as well as through other
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ways, such
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as an assay or an academic work. In my
experience writting
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experience, writing
experience writing
an academic work is superior to tests in the majority of the cases. By performing and
writting
the act of creating written works
writing
a task I believe the true
knowledge
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of a student can be seen because it requires not only knowing the studied
material but
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material, but
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being able to
understant
know and comprehend the nature or meaning of
understand
it enough to implement it into other subjects and
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cause to move by pulling
draw
an educated conclusion.
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, in my opinion,
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represents
true
knowledge
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. In conclusions, evaluating a
students
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student
is a
diffcult
not easy; requiring great physical or mental effort to accomplish or comprehend or endure
difficult
task and much consideration should be done so that we can know if a student memorize the material or
truely
in accordance with truth or fact or reality
truly
knows it.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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