Computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in offices every day. Working from home should be encouraged as it is good for workers and employers. Do you agree or disagree?

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Owing to the fact that technologies as computers and the internet have offered the opportunity for

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worker

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workers

the worker

a worker

work

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from

home

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rather than spend

male possessive pronoun

his

whole day at the office. Some people think

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can be an advantages for both workers and employers.I Partly agree with the idea that working from

home

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by using network or other ways to complete the job its better than working from the office.

Firstly

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. People need to communicate with others.Working from

home

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can have an

affect

a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon

effect

on their communication skills.

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, people tend to make a

friend ship

the state of being friends (or friendly)

friendship

with the others around them.

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, in school student used to be friends with

othder

any of various alternatives; some other

another

other

student

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Similarly

coworker

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a coworker

the coworker

who works in the same company

normaly become

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normally becomes

normally become

friends.

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, its

considerd

deem to be

consider

healther

introduces two alternatives

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weather

harder

to go to

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than

work

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from

home

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because many

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worker

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workers

can do some sport in their way

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as walking to work

work

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as walking or cycling while

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hard thing

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a hard thing

to do it at

home

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Anthor

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Another

point to

considerd

deem to be

consider

is that, being able to

finsh

come or bring to a finish or an end

finish

fish

furnish

the

Work

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home

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can be

benbfit

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beneficial

benefit

to.Some employees

complyin

express complaints, discontent, displeasure, or unhappiness

complain

about how fair their companies are

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the transport fee has increased.

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Despite

the fact that, many companies

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do not offer

have not offered

any extra money to cover the transportation cost. Many

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worker

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workers

prefer to

work

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from

home

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to be close to their family in their especial days.

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as, their

children

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child's

children's

birthday which

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birthday, which

could be

impossbil

not capable of occurring or being accomplished or dealt with

impossible

for

office

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office workers

an office worker

the office worker

worker

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attended

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attend

since they have to

complate

having every necessary or normal part or component or step

complete

compete

the

work

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before go

home

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In conclusion, from my point of view, I Believe that if the companies used

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technology in a good way as by reducing the

offfice

place of business where professional or clerical duties are performed

office

houres

a period of time assigned for work

hours

horse

and allowed the

emplyees

a worker who is hired to perform a job

employees

to be more with their families without affect their teamwork. At that point

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I think

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will be a great thing to encourage companies to do in the future.

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Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Relevant & specific examples

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309 words

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Computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in offices every day. Working from home should be encouraged as it is good for workers and employers. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think the government should invest more money in teaching science than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that the only reason for learning language is in order to travel ro or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that an international car-free day is an effective way to reduce air pollution. Others think there are more effective ways to do this. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible.

Please elaborate on your current physical and mental health, including any dental or oral treatment, medical interventions, and mental health therapy or counseling.