Computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in offices every day. Working from home should be encouraged as it is good for workers and employers. Do you agree or disagree?
Owing to the fact that technologies as computers and the internet have offered the opportunity for
worker
to Suggestion
workers
the worker
a worker
work
from home
rather than spend he
whole day at the office. Some people think male possessive pronoun
his
this
can be an advantages for both workers and employers.I Partly agree with the idea that working from home
by using network or other ways to complete the job its better than working from the office.
Firstly
. People need to communicate with others.Working from home
can have an affect
on their communication skills. a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
effect
For example
, people tend to make a friend ship
with the others around them. the state of being friends (or friendly)
friendship
In other words
, in school student used to be friends with othder
studentany of various alternatives; some other
another
other
.
Accept space
.
Similary
, Suggestion
Similarly
coworker
who works in the same company Suggestion
a coworker
the coworker
normaly become
friends.Suggestion
normally becomes
normally become
Also
, its considerd
deem to be
consider
healther
to go to introduces two alternatives
whether
weather
harder
work
than work
from home
because many worker
can do some sport in their way Suggestion
workers
to
Suggestion
as walking to work
work
as walking or cycling while this
is hard thing
to do it at Suggestion
a hard thing
home
.
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point to Suggestion
Another
considerd
is that, being able to deem to be
consider
finsh
the come or bring to a finish or an end
finish
fish
furnish
Work
at home
can be benbfit
to.Some employees Suggestion
beneficial
benefit
complyin
about how fair their companies areexpress complaints, discontent, displeasure, or unhappiness
complain
.
Accept space
.
Moreover
the transport fee has increased.Despit
the fact that, many companies Suggestion
Despite
do not offers
any extra money to cover the transportation cost. Many Suggestion
do not offer
have not offered
worker
prefer to Suggestion
workers
work
from home
to be close to their family in their especial days.Such
as, their children
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child's
children's
birthday which
could be Accept comma addition
birthday, which
impossbil
for not capable of occurring or being accomplished or dealt with
impossible
office
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office workers
an office worker
the office worker
worker
to attended
since they have to Suggestion
attend
complate
the having every necessary or normal part or component or step
complete
compete
work
before go home
.
In conclusion, from my point of view, I Believe that if the companies used Accept space
.
this
technology in a good way as by reducing the offfice
place of business where professional or clerical duties are performed
office
houres
and allowed the a period of time assigned for work
hours
horse
emplyees
to be more with their families without affect their teamwork. At that pointa worker who is hired to perform a job
employees
,
I think Accept space
,
this
will be a great thing to encourage companies to do in the future.Submitted by asd43214321asd on
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