Computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in offices every day. Working from home should be encouraged as it is good for workers and employers. Do you agree or disagree?

Owing to the fact that technologies as computers and the internet have offered the opportunity for
worker
Suggestion
workers
the worker
a worker
to
work
from
home
rather than spend
he
male possessive pronoun
his
whole day at the office. Some people think
this
can be an advantages for both workers and employers.I Partly agree with the idea that working from
home
by using network or other ways to complete the job its better than working from the office.
Firstly
. People need to communicate with others.Working from
home
can have an
affect
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
effect
on their communication skills.
For example
, people tend to make a
friend ship
the state of being friends (or friendly)
friendship
with the others around them.
In other words
, in school student used to be friends with
othder
any of various alternatives; some other
another
other
student
.
Accept space
.
Similary
Suggestion
Similarly
,
coworker
Suggestion
a coworker
the coworker
who works in the same company
normaly become
Suggestion
normally becomes
normally become
friends.
Also
, its
considerd
deem to be
consider
healther
introduces two alternatives
whether
weather
harder
to go to
work
than
work
from
home
because many
worker
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workers
can do some sport in their way
to
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as walking to work
work
as walking or cycling while
this
is
hard thing
Suggestion
a hard thing
to do it at
home
.
Anthor
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Another
point to
considerd
deem to be
consider
is that, being able to
finsh
come or bring to a finish or an end
finish
fish
furnish
the
Work
at
home
can be
benbfit
Suggestion
beneficial
benefit
to.Some employees
complyin
express complaints, discontent, displeasure, or unhappiness
complain
about how fair their companies are
.
Accept space
.
Moreover
the transport fee has increased.
Despit
Suggestion
Despite
the fact that, many companies
do not offers
Suggestion
do not offer
have not offered
any extra money to cover the transportation cost. Many
worker
Suggestion
workers
prefer to
work
from
home
to be close to their family in their especial days.
Such
as, their
children
Suggestion
child's
children's
birthday which
Accept comma addition
birthday, which
could be
impossbil
not capable of occurring or being accomplished or dealt with
impossible
for
office
Suggestion
office workers
an office worker
the office worker
worker
to
attended
Suggestion
attend
since they have to
complate
having every necessary or normal part or component or step
complete
compete
the
work
before go
home
.
Accept space
.
In conclusion, from my point of view, I Believe that if the companies used
this
technology in a good way as by reducing the
offfice
place of business where professional or clerical duties are performed
office
houres
a period of time assigned for work
hours
horse
and allowed the
emplyees
a worker who is hired to perform a job
employees
to be more with their families without affect their teamwork. At that point
,
Accept space
,
I think
this
will be a great thing to encourage companies to do in the future.
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