Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunize their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?

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Discussion regarding the topic "Usage of
vaccine
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for
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to
cure
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of childhood diseases" is always
an
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a
debate
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debatable
one. To my knowledge, usage of
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vaccine
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the vaccine
vaccines
, is either for prevention or
cure
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the
disease
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. Let discuss some of the advantages in the following.
Firstly
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, For the former Prevention, vaccination should be given must in order to avoid them for the rest of
life
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.
For example
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, Polio which should
vaccine
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at the early stage of
life
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, which may
leads
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lead
to death or leave the child physically challenged. If they become physically challenged
then
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they need to suffer for the rest of their
life
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.
Vaccine
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for these
sort
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sorts
of
disease
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are
must
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musts
, for the betterment of
entire
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the entire life
an entire life
life
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. For the
later
referring to the second of two things or persons mentioned (or the last one or ones of several)
latter
point, immunize the children in order not get it once more in
an
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a
life
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time.
For Example
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, Chicken pox is the one which will show up at the early stage of childhood, may be
below
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under
five years. Vaccination for these should be must as a
cure
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.
Its
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It's
not considered as
deadly
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dead
, Nowadays, but when we consider the past lot of lives are lost because of it. Considering the other side of the coin,
continuos
continuing in time or space without interruption
continuous
continued
usage
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use
of
vaccine
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may hamper the
developement
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
of natural immune system. Some of the kids are dependent on medicine as
natural immune system
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a natural immune system
was damaged because of
medicine
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the medicine
. They should depend on the
vaccine
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through out
all the way through
throughout
their
life
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and sometimes it may lead to
situation
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a situation
the situation
situations
, where usage of them will not
cure
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the
disease
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. In conclusion, Usage of
immune
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immunity
for
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to
from
the
disease
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is good for
life
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, as long as it was not
an
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a
habbit
an established custom
habit
hobbit
rabbit
.
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