Some people think that watching sport is a waste of leisure time. do you agree or disagree ?

International sport activities,
such
as the
oplymic
games or the champions league, is one of the most watched events on television. Many people worldwide
wait
Suggestion
waits
in anticipation for months until the event start and
than
subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)
then
spend hours watching it through the screen
in
Suggestion
with
plessure
a fundamental feeling that is hard to define but that people desire to experience
pleasure
. Others,
on the other hand
, think it is a waste of valuable time which could be
spend
Suggestion
spent
differently. I would consider
my self
reflexive form of "me"
myself
a
sport
Suggestion
sports
fan and I enjoy watching it very much. I believe that athletic competitions
allows
Suggestion
allow
people from all over the world to connect and unite around a single team or a person. It helps us forget about the hard and
stresfull
extremely irritating to the nerves
stressful
day we had at work or the bad test score we
recieved
conforming to the established language usage of educated native speakers
received
yesterday.
Furthermore
,
idealization
Suggestion
an idealization
of a team or a sportsman allows people who
whould
past tense of "will"
would
normaly
under normal conditions
normally
be
considred
carefully weighed
considered
enemeies
an opposing military force
enemies
, like Israelis and
palestinians
a descendant of the Arabs who inhabited Palestine
Palestinians
for example
, to sit together and have common
whishes
hope for; have a wish
wishes
and goals.
Sport
Suggestion
Spirit
teaches us to combine around a single idea and fight together in order to achieve it. Despite the above mentioned, I think watching sport should be done during our free time and it should not interfere with our daily
acitivites
any specific behavior
activities
. Staring at the television during work or not studying
proparly
in the right manner
properly
probably
because of an athletic
competetion
a business relation in which two parties compete to gain customers
competition
intefere
come between so as to be hindrance or obstacle
interfere
with our daily lives and may
effect
have an effect upon
affect
our own
ambishions
a cherished desire
ambitions
ambition
. Sport should be watched so we can get motivated to achieve our individual trophies and not preventing us from getting them. In conclusion, I think every person should spend its leisure time as he please. Some enjoy watching sports, others like reading or physical training. Regardless, it should not stop us from our achievement and
whishes
hope for; have a wish
wishes
.
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