Some people think that watching sport is a waste of leisure time. do you agree or disagree ?

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International sport activities,

such

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as the

oplymic

Suggestion

games or the champions league, is one of the most watched events on television. Many people worldwide

wait

Suggestion

waits

in anticipation for months until the event start and

than

subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)

then

spend hours watching it through the screen

Suggestion

with

plessure

a fundamental feeling that is hard to define but that people desire to experience

pleasure

. Others,

on the other hand

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, think it is a waste of valuable time which could be

spend

Suggestion

spent

differently. I would consider

my self

reflexive form of "me"

myself

sport

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sports

fan and I enjoy watching it very much. I believe that athletic competitions

allows

Suggestion

allow

people from all over the world to connect and unite around a single team or a person. It helps us forget about the hard and

stresfull

extremely irritating to the nerves

stressful

day we had at work or the bad test score we

recieved

conforming to the established language usage of educated native speakers

received

yesterday.

Furthermore

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idealization

Suggestion

an idealization

of a team or a sportsman allows people who

whould

past tense of "will"

would

normaly

under normal conditions

normally

considred

carefully weighed

considered

enemeies

an opposing military force

enemies

, like Israelis and

palestinians

a descendant of the Arabs who inhabited Palestine

Palestinians

for example

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, to sit together and have common

whishes

hope for; have a wish

wishes

and goals.

Sport

Suggestion

Spirit

teaches us to combine around a single idea and fight together in order to achieve it. Despite the above mentioned, I think watching sport should be done during our free time and it should not interfere with our daily

acitivites

any specific behavior

activities

. Staring at the television during work or not studying

proparly

in the right manner

properly

probably

because of an athletic

competetion

a business relation in which two parties compete to gain customers

competition

intefere

come between so as to be hindrance or obstacle

interfere

with our daily lives and may

effect

have an effect upon

affect

our own

ambishions

a cherished desire

ambitions

ambition

. Sport should be watched so we can get motivated to achieve our individual trophies and not preventing us from getting them. In conclusion, I think every person should spend its leisure time as he please. Some enjoy watching sports, others like reading or physical training. Regardless, it should not stop us from our achievement and

whishes

hope for; have a wish

wishes

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

276 words

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