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You are living in a University residence, and you have a problem with the high levels of noise from a new campus restaurant which is open until midnight. Write a letter to the governor of the University. In your letter, Complain about the situation Say why this is a problem And propose ways to reduce the noise

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Dear Sir, I am writing
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 letter regarding the noise pollution from the newly opened restaurant on the campus, especially during night hours. All the students are studying at that time and the loud music from that cafeteria is uneasy for everyone in the hostel. Nightlife in the university campus was very calm and stable before the opening of
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 restaurant and everyone was able to study peacefully. The bad thing is the location is very near to the student hostel and the sounds of bikes and cars of people coming to the restaurant make it worse. Most of the scholars leave the evening hours for
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study purpose but the distraction from
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 is not allowing people to concentrate on their course. I would like to request you on behalf of all the students of the hostel to take some
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 them. We would suggest minimizing the sound level from the food court can act as an effective solution and the parking should be only for the university residency persons. I hope you will understand our concerns and take some
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 immediately. Thank you in anticipation Yours faithfully
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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