Public celebrations (such as national days, festivals etc) are held in most countries. These are often quite expensive, and some people say that governments should spend money on more useful things. Do you agree or disagree?

Public celebration

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A public celebration

often includes people from various cultures and communities. The prime motive of celebrations of festivals and national days is to bring people closer to each other. Most of the culturally diverse countries celebrate their festivals with great zeal and enthusiasm which turns out to be a costly affair.

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, it is considered by some that

government

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the government

needs to be more prudent and

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spend money wisely on other essential things.

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with, in the event of a national holiday people come together and celebrate it. By doing

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so, they

share an emotional connect with others. There is justifiable evidence that

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events help in building harmony and bring peace and prosperity between individuals.

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gathering and celebrating of events is very much essential for countries having diverse cultures.

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, in India the festival of Diwali and Eid is celebrated nationally, and all people enjoy it with great passion.

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, it even leads to cultural awareness among people of the same country.

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, to maintain unity and to create a feeling of

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togetherness, having

public celebrations is a must.

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, contrarians are of the opinion that celebrating

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events is a costly affair, and

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money can be used to tackle other societal problems issues of the society.

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, many developing countries are struggling with poverty, employment and healthcare. It is attributed by many that

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the government

should invest in projects, which address these issues rather than spend on public celebrations.

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, in Brazil the government is committed to invest in projects which will generate employment for the locals. To conclude, spending money on public celebrations is completely preposterous. There are irrefutable claims which highlight

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severe, grave

issues which needs to be taken off.