Wealthy nation should assist poor countries with humanitarian relief. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is considered by many that rich countries ought to help poor nations when they become unable to meet their basic needs. I, personally, support with

this

viewpoint; in the following paragraphs I will discuss elaborately that wealthy countries should continue their help in the form of humanitarian relief in order to make a

world

with no hunger and to extend their business around the universe.

Firstly

, it is largely developed nations' moral responsibility to provide daily essentials to poverty-stricken nations. The help can be done by any means,

such

as, by distributing emergency clean water, food and clothes. Rich countries are supposed to come forward to change the lives of destitute nations because they ruled those nations in the past; by smuggling their wealth, they made them poor nations.

Moreover

, rich countries are now leading the

world

and they are now policy makers. To make a peaceful, happy and hunger-free

world

, they should help poorer nations so that these nations can prosper in every field.

Secondly

, usually, multi-national companies are run by wealthy nations. Those companies always look for new markets of their produced commodities around the

world

. If they assist

unprivileged

nations to progress their lives, they have a chance to extend their market in those nations in future. Because when a nation prosper, they tend to spend on luxury and multi-national companies can take advantage of

this

chance.

For example

, nowadays, China is assisting certain poor African countries so that they can extend their market in

near future

Suggestion

the near future

in those nations. In conclusion, developed countries ought to continue their humanitarian help in destitute nations not only it is their responsibility but

also

to increase their business in those nations.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

282 words

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