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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #information #research #business #world
First
 of all,
information
 is that thing which is fruitful to everyone in different aspects
such
 as scientific research,
business
 and the
acedemic
associated with academia or an academy
academic
 world. Having
information
 is a good source of knowledge,
therefore
, it is beneficial to share as much as
information
 as possible. I agree that some
information
 is too paramount and too valuable to be shared freely. To embark
that I
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that, I
 believe,
information
 plays a vital role in everyone's life because it helps a lot in every
circumstances
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circumstance
,
for example
, from
acedemic perspective
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an academic perspective
academic perspective
the academic perspective
academic perspectives
, teachers should give different
informations
a message received and understood
information
 on a daily basis to
student
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the student
students
 because it enhances their knowledge and it may help in developing their way of thinking. From
business perspective
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a business perspective
,
for instance
, if someone has a plethora of knowledge of
business
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business, then
then
 he will never be scared before starting a new
business
,
moreover he
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moreover, he
 would already know about either his
business
 will reach at its highest level or not. On the flip side of the coin, it is generally believed that some
information
 is too important to be shared freely. For illustration, an
information
of
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on
with
 a good touch or a bad touch which is usually given to children is too valuable to be shared freely because
this
information
 is paramount for children because they do not know about
this
information
 in their childhood,
furthermore
,
informations
a message received and understood
information
 about their own nation must be given freely to children.
In addition
 to
this
,
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,
information
 about
trafic
the aggregation of things (pedestrians or vehicles) coming and going in a particular locality during a specified period of time
traffic
 rules should be given at free of cost since childhood because it reduces the accidents. To sum up, some general
informations
a message received and understood
information
 which must be known by everyone should be given freely,
otherwise
, the
information
 in the
acedemic
associated with academia or an academy
academic
 world and
scientific
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science
 research should be given at some cost.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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