More and more businesses as well as individuals are choosing to communicate either professinally and socially using technology rather than being face to face.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating.

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smartphones have taken control over human brains and many businesses and individuals are fully utilising the opportunity of communication either professionally or socially with preference over of sitting and talking.There are pros and cons to

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dependence on technology.In

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I will pen down to

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some of them. Technology has crippled mankind with their easy access and superhuman quality.The screen based media has been rampantly used by the businesses for promoting their adverts as well as gaining propaganda in the

world

of human turned robots.We have been so much engrossed in texting and browsing that the smartphones have taken away our capability of abstract and intuitive thinking.Cell phones are now being called as extended minds where humans lose their ability to comprehend.The age of face to face discussion has become extinct to

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an extent that people cannot dream of a web free

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the crime rate has increased among children with their easy access to the prohibited sites along with multiple social networking sites and thereby causing

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a huge impact

on their psychological development and forcing them towards a dark future.

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technology is not bad and we should be properly aware of its specific usage.Leaving apart the addiction towards texting

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web media

has provided

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has been provided

with vast information within fraction of seconds that was unthinkable in the era of telephone and telegraph.Not only that, people can communicate with their friends and relatives anytime and anywhere across the globe.Social sites like

facebook

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Facebook

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twitter and

instagram

have become the closest friend of human beings, which apparently have removed all the man made boundaries.Telecommunication has been really a boon to mankind with its justifiable usage. To conclude, businesses and individuals are using telecommunication both professionally and socially. Unfortunately

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mode of communication has been exploited by the mass media leading to crippled human beings with loss of

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intuition

and critical thinking. Social browsing has increased the violence among children. To think in a positive way, it has helped us in gathering vast information and made communication easy through various websites which have created a new

world

of screen web media.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Relevant & specific examples

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349 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Efficiency
Convenience
Instant messaging
Video calls
Cost-effectiveness
Economical
Accessibility
Physical barriers
Nuanced understanding
Impersonal
Misunderstandings
Reliance
Technical failures
Vulnerable
Security breaches
Hacking
Data theft
Sensitive information
Digital communication
Face-to-face interactions

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More and more businesses as well as individuals are choosing to communicate either professinally and socially using technology rather than being face to face.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating.

Fully explain your ideas

It is commonly said that today's children are facing huge challenges. This essay indent to discuss the causes of these pressures and give some suggestions to solve them.

Look at the below picture and describe the life cycle of a butterfly. You should write the following: - Briefly about the butterfly (insect family) - Describe the different stages (eggs, caterpillar, pupa and butterfly)

Living in a country where zou have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or diagree with this statement?

Is it better for students to study from home rather than go to school? Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

You see an advertisement for a product. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Tell your friend where you saw the advertisement Describe the product Explain why your friend should buy this product.