Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.

Food is the basic necessity of life for all mankind and living organisms in the world. In the modern era, technology advancements have brought new innovative methods to process eatables and
this
has affected in many different ways the life style of people living in my society.
First
of all, the
emerger
the combination of two or more commercial companies
merger
of
frozen food industry
Suggestion
the frozen food industry
has totally changed the way we cook food in the kitchen. It has actually reduced the time spent in
kitchen
Suggestion
the kitchen
kitchens
.
For example
, it takes less hours as meat is already clean, perfectly measured and packed in packets.
In addition
to
this
, it made our lives independent of each other and these days anyone can cook. These companies
also
provide half cooked meals which
helps
Suggestion
help
un trained
Suggestion
a trained
an trained
untrained
in trained
on trained
chefs
Suggestion
chef
. The user friendly recipes on the packets
also
help children to get their meals ready for
super
a light evening meal; served in early evening if dinner is at midday or served late in the evening at bedtime
supper
. To conclude, I feel that the food companies have
boost
Suggestion
boosted
independence and made cooking in
kitchen
Suggestion
the kitchen
much easier than before.
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  • Modern appliances
  • Pre-packaged meals
  • Cooking time
  • Nutritional value
  • Public health
  • Work-life balance
  • Cultural heritage
  • Food industry
  • Processed foods
  • Packaging waste
  • Social bonding
  • Culinary skills
  • International cuisine
  • Preservatives
  • Additives
  • Contamination
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