In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. some people think that this is good for a country, but other believes that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In some countries, either developed or developing, some of the people at very high positions control lots of
wealth
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This
creates an imbalance in society, so often people think that government should control the Linking Words
wealth
of a person. But extreme Use synonyms
wealth
is good If people use it for national or societal progress. In my opinion, earning a high Use synonyms
wealth
is good. There are many reasons which support my opinion.
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Firstly
, Extreme Linking Words
wealth
can be generated by doing businesses. If Use synonyms
one
creates a successful Use synonyms
business
, it creates lots of jobs. A successful Use synonyms
business
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also
shows a Linking Words
nations
progress. Suggestion
nation's
For example
, in country India OLA is Linking Words
very successful
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a very successful business
business
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.
It connects drivers and riders through a mobile app. Now OLA’s owners making a lot of Accept space
.
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wealth but
at the same Accept comma addition
wealth, but
time
they are solving two big problems in India. Now no Use synonyms
one
needs his personal vehicle to commute from Use synonyms
one
place to another in a city. Use synonyms
Also
traffic problem is resolved due to Linking Words
limited number
of vehicles used. So if Suggestion
a limited number
one
is accumulating Use synonyms
wealth
to solve the Use synonyms
society
problems than it is beneficial for a country to allow people to accumulate Suggestion
society's
wealth
.
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Secondly
, people are driven to do hard work, if they are rewarded. Money is a form of reward which pushes people to do Linking Words
extreme hard work
. Materialistic things help us to do daily tasks more efficiently and swiftly. Suggestion
the extreme hard work
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at
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must reach on Suggestion
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time
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helps
him to do his job perfectly.
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help
On the other hand
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cases people
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wealth
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,
celebrities are seen doing drugs. Their children spend lots of Accept space
,
wealth
in late night parties, expensive clothes and cars. So it’s a responsibility of government to give warning to these people.
In conclusion, I would say that controlling high salaries would impend the growth of a country, but at the same Use synonyms
time
government should be aware the money should not be used in detrimental ways for human progress.Use synonyms
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