Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, Vegetarians are increasing day by day due to health reasons. Non-vegetarian food lovers are decreasing considerably, due to awareness of benefits of vegetables. Some of the usage
are
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as follows. Meat, consider to be heavy meal, need
intense workout
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an intense workout
in order to make
digest
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digests
. Not only that, it
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also require
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also requires
special care to cook it properly. The uncooked food may lead to viral diseases. Ebola, is one of the
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examples
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cases. Ebola, not only
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a
viral
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disease, but
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deadly too. In case of, beef, pork, lamb, we need to check
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its
freshness and have to clean it properly before cooking it. There are lots of
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a rational motive for a belief or action
reasons
behind it. If they are not fresh,
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we may end up in having rotten or damaged meat,
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even though
they are preserved in
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the fridge
.
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The spices
used in the preparation sometimes lead to digestive problems.
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, Fish is good for health, especially for eyes. Not all of them improves the vision, but few or most of them.
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The ingredients
Ingredients
used for preparing fish curry, may
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have an effect upon
affect
our digestion.
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, Vegetable
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is
easily available anywhere and can be
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consumed
easily. They do have all the vitamins that are needed for
human body
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the human body
to grow, without any side
affects
property of a personal character that is portable but not used in business
effects
. In conclusion, Fruits and vegetables are good for health along with limited consumption of meat occasionally.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Plant-based diet
  • Chronic diseases
  • Greenhouse gas emissions
  • Deforestation
  • Water consumption
  • Mitigate climate change
  • Natural resources
  • Animal welfare
  • Humane and ethical choice
  • Healthcare costs
  • Sustainable farming
  • Legumes
  • Fruits and vegetables
  • Vegetarian
  • Vegan
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