Economic growth is the only way to end world poverty. However, some people say it lead to environment damage and should be stopped. To what extent do you agree ?

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Economical
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Economic
stability and growth
is
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are
a
crusial
of extreme importance; vital to the resolution of a crisis
crucial
aspect in preventing poverty and hunger.
Achieveing
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Achieving
finicial
involving financial matters
financial
finical
growth may
ocur
come to pass
occur
in different ways and that depends largely on its natural
resorces
available source of wealth; a new or reserve supply that can be drawn upon when needed
resources
.
For example
, in
coutries
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
cultures
where crops can be grown
finicial
involving financial matters
financial
finical
gain can be made through exporting.
For instance
, Israel export fruits and vegetables all over the world. Another example can be seen in
Holland where
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Holland, where
flowers are grown and shipped worldwide.
Also
, by mining local mineral many
coutries
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
have increased and strengthened their economy. Classic example for
this
can be seen in African states like Sudan and Congo.
Regrdless
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Regardless
of the way, Increased production and export lead to
influx
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the influx
an influx
of money and the increased economical condition of the population.
Regrdless
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Regardless
of the way, the main downside of economical
gowth
(biology) the process of an individual organism growing organically; a purely biological unfolding of events involved in an organism changing gradually from a simple to a more complex level
growth
lies in the major environmental
effetc
property of a personal character that is portable but not used in business
effects
it cause. Destroying the natural landscape through mining
causse
give rise to; cause to happen or occur, not always intentionally
causes
cause
case
devistating
making light of
devastating
effect on the natural landscape and
wild life
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
.
Furthermore
,
industrealization
the development of industry on an extensive scale
industrialization
industrialisation
and increased air
polution
undesirable state of the natural environment being contaminated with harmful substances as a consequence of human activities
pollution
is
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are
an unwanted
effwct
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
effect
caused by increased use of cars and
airplains
an aircraft that has a fixed wing and is powered by propellers or jets
aeroplanes
. In my
opinion there
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opinion, there
are other,
substantially
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substantial
better ways address poverty without
effecting
arousing affect
affecting
our
environmet
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
.
Initially
, education on how to raise local crops
such
as corn and rise can assist the population. Aside from that, using environmentally friendly materials to optimize
daly
every day; without missing a day
daily
day
delay
life can
drasticly
in a drastic manner
drastically
improve poverty. Example
to
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of
that include the use of recycled materials for
buiding
a structure that has a roof and walls and stands more or less permanently in one place
building
houses, and using solar energy for electricity. In conclusion,
although
economical growth is an
imprtant
of great significance or value
important
way to fight
overty
the state of having little or no money and few or no material possessions
poverty
, I believe we can find better,
enviromentaly
for the environment
environmentally
friendly ways, to assist people.
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