Human activity has had a negative effect on plants and animals all over the world. Some people think that it is too late to do something about it. Others think that there is still time to take effective action. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Activites
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Activities
performed by humans had a
detoriating
become worse or disintegrate
deteriorating
effect on flora and fauna around the globe.While some people believe that there is no time to do anything on
this
, other people think that effective actions can be taken as there is still time. I my opinion, though we had
major impact
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a major impact
of
this
seen already, we can still work hard in the coming
future
by realising the importance of nature and taking preventive measures to preserve what we currently have. There were many devastating effects due to man's activity like the loss of habitat and extinction of several
species
. Out of these effects, the impact was higher
on
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in
the forests which is a home for many plants and animals. The cutting of trees for commercial purposes or daily use led to a decline of forest cover resulting in deforestation. It is almost impossible to gain back the
forests we
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forests, we
earlier had. Another point to consider is that, many varieties of plants and animals are now extinct and many
species
are
endagered
(of flora or fauna) in imminent danger of extinction
endangered
.
For instance
, there are only around 30 tigers left in the world and
thus
, they are added in the list of
endagered
(of flora or fauna) in imminent danger of extinction
endangered
species
.
On the other hand
, there is a scope of improvement which could be done by preventing
further
damage and spreading awareness.
Although
the effects cannot
reverted we
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reverted, we
revert we
revert revert we
can prevent
future
impact by preserving what is
currently
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current
with us. Animals and plants in danger of becoming extinct can be specially taken care.
ALong
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Along
with
this
, public awareness can be spread teaching the importance of
environment
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the environment
and its benefits. Planting of trees could be initiated to increase the number of plants in our surroundings.
This
way any damage in
future
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the future
can be prevented.
Hence
, it is still not late to start measures to preserve
environment
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the environment
.
Finally
, I think
instead
of thinking
on
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about
what we have already lost we can work to protect the remaining plants and animals. We can still save the earth by small efforts
from
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of
individuals.
Although
past
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the past
cannot be changed, we can still make our
future
better. To conclude, I think the major loss of habitat and loss of
species
could be
unchanged but
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unchanged, but
we still have time to do
somthing
an unspecified thing, agency, amount, etc.
something
for a better
future
.
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