Some believe that it is the responsibility of people to take care of the environment. Others say it is the government that should take care of the environment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is believed by some people that the
government
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is responsible for looking after the
environment
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, whereas others are of the opinion that the
environment
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ought to be protected by the people. I am of the view that the
government
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should take the
responsiblity
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
to protect the
environment
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.
Government
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is given the mandate by the people to run and manage a state
effectively which
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effectively, which
includes taking care and protecting the
environment
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as well and I agree. People pay taxes to the
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government which
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government, which
in turns elects people who are solely paid to manage the affairs of the state. Since the people have fulfilled
thier
of them or themselves
their
obligation by providing financial support to the
government
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, it is in turn
goverment's
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
governments
government's
responsiblity
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
to take care of the country, its people and its
environment
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.
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, the
government
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has the power to make laws and implement them. The
government
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should make laws to discourage
pollution
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and waste production in order to protect the
environment
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. Banning of plastic bags, high carbon oxide emitting vehicles are prime examples of steps taken by
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government
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the government
governments
of many developed countries to reduce
pollution
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. Another example of
such
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measures taken by the
government
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of some developed countries is the introduction of
higher tax rate
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higher tax rates
the higher tax rate
a higher tax rate
for the companies producing higher
pollution
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. Admittedly, the people are the main cause of creating
pollution
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. Despite knowing the harmful effects of plastic bags, people are still using and producing them.
Moreover
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,
instead
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of using
mass transport system
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a mass transport system
, people still continue to use
thier
of them or themselves
their
own private vehicles which in turn
causes
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cause
more
pollution
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since
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from
the number of vehicles being used are increased by many folds.
For instance
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, the ozone layer in Australia is damaged to
such
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an extent that it is thought to be vanished in a couple of decades and the major reason for
this
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is said to be use of products that emit CFC. CFC is known to be the most dangerous chemical
pollution
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that affects the
environment
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since
this
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damages the ozone layer beyond one's imagination. In conclusion, people might be the reason for causing
pollution
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by not taking steps to control it, I believe that it is the
government
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's
responsiblity
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
to introduce
such
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measures which limit the
pollution
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caused by the people
such
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as higher tax rates for high
pollution
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casuing
the act of causing something to happen
causing
cashing
businesses and banning of non environmental friendly products.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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