Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?
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then
they will be addicted of this
as well as lack of socialization.
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internet
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victims
such
as obesity, less body strength and many more.
Secondly
, being addicted by social networking people are losing
their socialization as they make new friends with the help of these applications, so they do not prefer to communicate face to face with their friends and neighbours because of using these applications to communicate people. Suggestion
is losing
In addition
, even they do not like to spend time with their family members. Because of this
, communication skills of a person is reducing
and it is not really appropriate for them.
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is really have
several advantages for individuals, but due to over using of Suggestion
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really has
this
, it may be insufficient for human beings. They may face many problems associated with their health and also
their relationship may be destroyed. Submitted by gursewakg78 on
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