Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays, increasing popularity of social networking people
have socialized
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has socialized
more with each other throughout the world.
they
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They
can make friends easily who from different nationalities. But, a fair number of people argue that
influences
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the influences
of
this
networking
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are
worse
on
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for
residents and society. If people spend more and more time
on
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to
browse the internet
then
they will be addicted of
this
as well as lack of socialization.
Firstly
, having a habit of
spend
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spending
batter
something superior in quality or condition or effect
better
quality of time on browse
internet
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the internet
is very dangerous for users.
they
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They
shall addicted
of
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to
social networking
such
as Facebook, twitter, WhatsApp, Instagram and many more.
what's
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What's
more,
this
is
really big cause
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the really big cause
a really big cause
of many physical and mental problems. Of course, when they will
sitting
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sit
more on
bed
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the bed
in order to suffer on these
sites
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sites, then
then
definitely they will be
victim
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a victim
the victim
victims
of that obstacles
such
as obesity, less body strength and many more.
Secondly
, being addicted by social networking people
are losing
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is losing
their socialization as they make new friends with the help of these applications, so they do not prefer to communicate face to face with their friends and neighbours because of using these applications to communicate people.
In addition
, even they do not like to spend time with their family members. Because of
this
, communication skills of a person is
reducing
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reduced
and it is not really appropriate for them. To conclude, undeniable, social networking
is really have
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has really had
really has
several advantages for individuals, but due to over using of
this
, it may be insufficient for human beings. They may face many problems associated with their health and
also
their relationship may be destroyed.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • erosion
  • face-to-face
  • interactions
  • privacy concerns
  • data breaches
  • misinformation
  • polarize
  • cyberbullying
  • online harassment
  • procrastination
  • productivity
  • social isolation
  • dissemination
  • breeding ground
  • vast amounts
  • personal information
  • mental health
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