Atomic energy is becoming more and more popular energy source. However, some people argue that nuclear power puts life on the Earth to danger. What is your opinion?
Nowadays, natural energy sources are getting
exstinct
. Atomic became one of the Alternative sources for energy. In present world because of growth of population, we should no longer in existence; lost or especially having died out leaving no living representatives
extinct
relay
on Wind, solar and nuclear resources for have confidence or faith in
rely
power
generation. Each one has its own advantages and disadvantages.
Let's deal with advantages, Wind power
cannot be available all the time and all the places, so as the sun light
. In the rays of the sun
sunlight
this
case Nuclear power
plant is only option
that can Suggestion
the only option
built
anywhere, keeping mind the place should be far from population. It Suggestion
build
can be generate
using the chemical reactions and can provide electricity for almost all the cities. Because of Suggestion
can generate
this
reason, it became an
popular alternative source of energy to most of the countries. As developed and developing states Suggestion
a
requires
huge amount of Suggestion
require
power
for their industries and for household needs. As its
difficult to meet all the requirement with available resources, only source to meet the requirement is atomic it is
it's
power
generation. Eventhough
cost Suggestion
Even though
incured
to establish it is make oneself subject to; bring upon oneself; become liable to
incurred
high but
it's Accept comma addition
high, but
worthful
considering the consumption.
On the other hand
, There are lots of diadvantages
of using it. It should be constructed away from the residential area. If the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position
disadvantages
advantages
some thing
goes an unspecified thing, agency, amount, etc.
something
wron
entire city or area will be burned. not correct; not in conformity with fact or truth
wrong
Moreover
, we know the consequences of explosion in Japan. Its
not only Suggestion
It's
dangerous but
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dangerous, but
also
risk involved in maintainence
. If activity involved in maintaining something in good working order
maintenance
overlooked
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overlooked, then
then
there is not only hidden treat to life ,
but Accept space
,
also
environmental hazzard
. Maybe, with Suggestion
an environmental hazard
environmental hazard
environmental hazards
this
reasons
, making us Suggestion
reason
to rethink
about it. So environment lovers are Suggestion
rethink
aganist to construction
of these Suggestion
against the construction
against to construction
against to the construction
aganist to the construction
power
plants.
In conclusion, As there are both advantages and disadvantages, it's we need to decide based on the necessity and with the available resources. To my opinion, we can go with power
plant under precautionary methods.
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