It is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of the media on our lives. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media rich society.

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Owing to the big effect that the media have in our

live

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lives

life

and how hard it is become to avoid the influence that it is have in our daily life.I will discuss the positives and the negatives of living in a society that depend on

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media. On the one hand. There are some

considreble

large or relatively large in number or amount or extent or degree

considerable

advantages for

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media.One of

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this

plural of "this"

these

those

advantages is that the media become the

first

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option to know more about what

is is

have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)

happning

an event that happens

happening

in other places.

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, by watching the news people can understand more about the situation of other countries.

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was

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harder

without the help of the media.

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, another advantage is people can use

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media to

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chemical process in which one atom or ion or group changes places with another

exchange

their culture.By using social

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a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information

media

made

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become possible.

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also

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disadvantage

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a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information

media

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, people are

bacoming

according with custom or propriety

becoming

more and more addicted to

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madia

a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information

media

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, some of them prefer to spend much time on

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media.

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unfortantely

by bad luck

unfortunately

had negatively

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affected

their social life.

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, people started to believe

every thing

all things

everything

that they read or hear.

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media have the power to convince people.

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can be a

disadvantages

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disadvantage

if it is used in a bad

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way, such

way such

makeing

the act that results in something coming to be

making

people believe in lies

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conclusion

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every thing can be armful if people used in

wrrong way

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the wrong way

wrong way

a wrong way

people

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People

can convert the negatives to positives if they used

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media

corrcetly

in an accurate manner

correctly

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Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Relevant & specific examples

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It is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of the media on our lives. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media rich society.

Your opinion

News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?

Companies should provide sports and social facilities for local communities. Do you agree or disagree?

Today more people are overweight than ever before. What in your opinion are the primary causes of this? What are the main effects of this epidemic?

IN SOME CITIES, PUBLIC PARKS AND OPEN SPACES ARE BEING CHANGED INTO GARDENS WHERE LOCAL RESIDENTS CAN GROW THEIR OWN FRUIT AND VEGETABLES. DO THE ADVANTAGES OUTWEIGH THE DISADVANTAGES?

It is true that environmental issues such as pollution and climate change affecting citizens worldwide. Although global finding are made to reduce these problems the solutions are not helpful.