Some people say that now we can see films on our phones and tablets, there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say to be fully enjoyed they need to be seen in the cinema. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

With the advancement of digital media, people have started watching movies on their mobile and laptops and stopped going to
multiplex
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a multiplex
the multiplex
. While others say, that to completely enjoy the
movie
one
needs to go the
Movie
hall
. Both sides have strong views which
needs
Suggestion
need
to be discussed,
however
, I believe that to completely enjoy the
movie
one
needs to head to the multiplex. Watching films in a
movie
hall
is
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are
a perfect outing
to escape
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escape
the pressure of work life.
Also
, production of movies
require
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requires
great deal
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a great deal
of
hardwork
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hard work
and innovation of actors. In the
movie
hall
one
can see the actors on
big screen
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the big screen
a big screen
and there are special sound and video impacts created which detaches
one
from
outer world
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the outer world
for some
time
.
For example
, Harry
potter
a craftsman who shapes pottery on a potter's wheel and bakes them it a kiln
Potter
was released in 5 D format and special seating a lighting effects were arranged in the
movie
hall
. It is total fun to watch
this
to
destress
psychological suffering
distress
oneself, and definitely,
this
cannot be arranged in our home.
However
, films can be seen on mobile phones or notebooks to save
time
and
money
. Nowadays, many people have
hectic schedule
Suggestion
a hectic schedule
hectic schedules
and do not have spare
time
to go out for 3 hours to see a
movie
.
Moreover
, they have other
priorties
status established in order of importance or urgency
priorities
parties
to spend their
money
on rather
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
on films.
Forinstance
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For instance
, a family of 4 has to spend
alteast
trying something to find out about it
test
Rs 1000 to see a new
movie
.Certainly, seeing
this
on the digital media can save people
time
and
money
and it gives them comfort. To sum up,
although
watching
movie
Suggestion
a movie
on phones and laptop can save a lot of
time
and
money but
Accept comma addition
money, but
devoids
separate into parts or portions
divides
the holistic experience of seeing on a big screen.Personally, I would like to watch it on a
bigscreen
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big screen
rather on the phone.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Convenience
  • Mobile Viewing
  • Cost-efficient
  • Time-efficient
  • Personalized experience
  • Immersive
  • Cinematic experience
  • Surround sound
  • Collective experience
  • Technical superiority
  • Sensory experience
  • Social hubs
  • Cultural events
  • Distractions
  • Preservation
  • Filmmaking art
  • Cinematographic nuances
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