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International tourism has become a huge industry in the world.Do the problems of international travel outweigh its advantages.

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It is irrefutable that
tourism
 has taken the economy of some countries to a mammoth dimension.
This
 essay seeks to discuss the advantages of international
tourism
 as it outweigh the disadvantages.
Firstly
,
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,
tourism
 brings and encourages development of a country which the masses in turn benefits from.
For instance
,
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,
Dubai and Seychelles
etc which
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etc., which
etc. which
 are the worlds most visited countries are known to have very good roads
,
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,
airports
,
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,
hotels and many other attractions which the people enjoy.
Secondly
,
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,
tourism
 has reduced drastically the problem of unemployment.
For
example people
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example, people
 work as tour guides
,
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,
drivers.
Also hotels and resturants
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Hotels and restaurants also
Also hotels and restaurants
 employ a large number of staff.On the whole, there is improvement in the standard of living.
Finally
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Finally, tourism
tourism
 promotes culture and ensures its diversity.
Similarly
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,
languages are learnt and business ideas are constantly exchanged.All these
gives
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give
 the tourist a deeper understanding of the host country.
On the other hand
,
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,
increasing crime rate is one of the major problems of international
tourism
.Some people in local communities cease
this
 opportunity to rob tourist of their
valubles
having great material or monetary value especially for use or exchange
valuables
valuable
such
 as cameras and
jewelry
an adornment (as a bracelet or ring or necklace) made of precious metals and set with gems (or imitation gems)
jewellery
 because they are in unfamiliar territory.
Furthermore
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tourists are likely to suffer from health challenges due to change of environment
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contagious diseases may be spread as well.
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Finally, tourism
tourism
 has endangered most natural reservoirs.
For example
, In
south
the region of the United States lying to the south of the Mason-Dixon line
South
 Africa,
frequent visit
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frequent visits
 to the
great
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Great
 Reef by tourist has caused more dangers to the site and the government has decided to shut it down for
awhile
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a while
. In conclusion
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,
after weighing the merits and demerits of
tourism
,
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i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 pen
down saying
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down, saying
 that the merits outweigh the demerits.
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