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Essay topics: In many western countries there is an increasing number of couples choosing to have no children. What are the advantages and disadvantages to couples having no children?

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Now a day’s it’s becoming normal in western society to have no children, despite from western
country many
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country, many
 couples even in Asian countries start planning to not have children’s.
Well it
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Well, it
 all depends on their future planning’s and targets in their
life
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. They might be thinking to spend their precious period of time with each other’s. In my experience I know one of my colleague living in California, once he said to me they don’t have plan children’s, they reason he quoted’ he is not stable financially to manage his
life
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 with current income resources. So I guess it varies in different situations to decide for babies. In my opinion,
its
it is
it's
 significantly important to have children’s to start your
life
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 in real manners. Our priorities will be
change
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changed
changing
, and we’ll know that’ how our parents have spent their sleepless
nights with us to
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nights with us
 make us comfortable. We’ll be more determined and focused in professional
life
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, to do something for our children’s. I think having no children’s will make be couple’s
life
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 frustrated, after sometime when there will be no changes and in
life
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. It humans demand to
expect always something
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always expect something
 different after certain time. In the end my conclusions are,
its
it is
it's
 mandatory to have children’s in
couple’s
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a couple’s life
life
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 at least one. As well they should spend their maximum efforts to make them a good person in society to serve for their country.
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