Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

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Advertising are basically to promote
particular company
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the particular company product
a particular company product
particular company products
product
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. They are very attractive for
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a
viewer, in order to increase their production. As most of us says, they encourage us to buy
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a
product
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while other's are
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against
to it. Let discussion each
other view
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other, view
point below. Coming to the view of promotions, encouraging us to have their
product
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, I will neither agree with it nor disagree with it. Lets take an example of soap sales,
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situation. If we go for
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the purchase
purchase
of groceries, which includes soaps,
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we will
usally
under normal conditions
usually
go for
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a
known
product
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. Because of the requirement, we won't go the one which we view,
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if we are not satisfied with the existing one
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we tend to change the
product
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. At that time, we
will choose
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chose
these sort of body wash. Regarding the other perspective, we can accept
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these people. Marketing main idea is to provide the information to their customers and leaving choice to them, whether they have to go for it or not.
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, some of offers from a company, may drive the consumers to buy their good's.
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, The Airlines company offered to and fro tickets with half of the regularly charged
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price, then
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we will not going to have it as they are
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offered
. In conclusion, Both the ideas have their own positive and negatives. But everything was entirely dependent on the end user who is going to use it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • encourage
  • persuade
  • manipulative
  • unnecessary
  • excessive
  • artificial needs
  • desires
  • consumers
  • oversaturation
  • impulse buying
  • financial problems
  • inform
  • educate
  • features
  • benefits
  • innovations
  • raise awareness
  • social issues
  • positive behavior
  • enrich
  • well-being
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