It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the friendship. Do you agree? Why or why not? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer

On of the great early writer once said, "A
friend
in need is a
friend
indeed." If we are true companions than we will always be helping our
acqaintances
personal knowledge or information about someone or something
acquaintances
acquaintance
in need. Some would argue that, we should not borrow
money
from a buddy, because it can harm or damage the friendship. Others think that there is no problem
in
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with
borrowing
money
from a
friend
untill
up to, before the time
until
unless we
return
it on time. After weighing
evidences
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the evidence
evidence
and considering all the aspects I personally feel that taking cash from a
friend
is not an issue. A
friend
can definitely borrow currency from other friends
it he
Accept comma addition
it, he
really needs it.
This
can be justified by following reasons and examples. Let's take an example of two very close
acqaintances
personal knowledge or information about someone or something
acquaintances
acquaintance
. One of them is rich and
other
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the other
is very poor and can't run his family and sometime may need
assest
having help; often used as a combining form
assisted
from the fortune
friend
. In
this
case the
friend
who is poor can ask the prosperous
friend
for
money
to overcome his current problems and
crysis
an unstable situation of extreme danger or difficulty
crisis
, and
when ever
at whatever time
whenever
he has enough
money
he can
retrun
go or come back to place, condition, or activity where one has been before
return
it back to his ally.
Furthermore
, I feel that, If the poor
friend
will be able to
return
the wealth back to his
friend
then
their alliance and bonding will become stronger. Similar to above example, consider an example of an unfortunate situation, where one of a or one of a family member of your
friend
suddenly meets an accident or a tragedy. He
ask
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asks
you for currency. Assuming that you have sufficient
money
, and if you are sure that the
friend
will
return
it back when he is able to recover from
this
unfortunate situation
than
subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)
then
, will you
not provide
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don't provide
aren't providing
him with the required
money
. I personally feel, that I will definitely provide him with the
money
. Others might cite, that it is not a good idea to acquire cash from mates because it may harm the affection. They might even provide reasons for supporting
this
argument, but I am very much inclined and having a feel that it is the
mutually
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mutual
understanding of friends which keeps them close. Ultimately, after weighing instances and considering both sides of the issue, I want to conclude that, there is no harm in borrowing
money
from friends
untill
up to, before the time
until
unless the reason for borrowing
money
is genuine and we
return
it back on time.
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