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More and more fathers are taking a break from their careers so that they can stay home and take care if their children while their wives work.This is better for the family than having both parents work full time. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

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Many fathers give up their jobs to take care of their homes and families
,
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,
but
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 don’t agree that
this
 is the best choice they can make.
This
 method of fathers staying at
home
 might work for some
families bt
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families, but
families but
families both
in others might not
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others might not
with others might not
with with others might not
 work.A stay at
home
father
 might end up not being happy staying at
home
.He may not have enough money to take care of himself. Families may
also
 have
times
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time
 together without the
father
 quitting his job. A
father
 may end up feeling so unhappy
sstaying
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is staying
s staying
 at
home
.
However
, he might miss being interested and challenged by job.
in
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In
 addition
,
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,
he gave up the opportunity to be with his colleagues who shared his professional interests.In exchange for these things, he spends his time doing house chores
such
 as mopping the floor
,
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,
cooking, feeding and dressing the children. When a
father
 gives up his
career he
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career, he
also
 gives up his salary.The
wifes
a married woman; a man's partner in marriage
wife
 keeps working
,
Accept space
,
but the salary
wont
will not
won't
 be as much as when the is working.
In addition
,
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,
only one person earns salary and when
they
of them or themselves
their
 family goes from two
salarries
something that remunerates
salaries
 to one
,
Accept space
,
they have to make changes in their lifestyle that are not
convienient
suited to your comfort or purpose or needs
convenient
. Children can benefit of time with their parents even when both parents work.In the
first
 place
,
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,
children spend most of the day in school, unless they are young.
In addition
,
Accept space
,
parents can spend quality time with their children in the evenings and on weekends.They can
also
 plan family vacations that
gives
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give
 them
opportunity
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the opportunity
an opportunity
 to have special experiences together. A stay at
home
father
 may seem like a good idea, but families should consider all sides of the issue, both financial and emotional, before making
such
 a big change in their lifestyle.
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