What are some important qualities of a good supervisor (boss)? Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important.

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Recently, many reports
reveal
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have revealed
that the relationship between the
boss
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and
staff
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is not good. They seldom talk to one another. Most of the
staff
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say that their bosses are bad tempered and their
boss
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always scold
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always scolds
them without reasons.
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, they are unwilling to communicate with their
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. How can the situation be improved? The
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should improve themselves and to have a good quality. In
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essay, I am going to state three qualities that are important for being a good
boss
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. A good
boss
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should have
good
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well
-mannered. When the
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have done
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has done
had done
something wrong, the
boss
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should not scold them at once. He
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she should give their
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chances to improve. If the
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still doesn’t improve it, he
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she may give them some warnings, rather than scolding them. Sometimes, scolding them would have an adverse effect. They will be very angry and won’t follow your instructions later.
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, if the
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are
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is
late to the
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, the
boss
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should listen to their explanations. Sometimes, there may be a traffic accident and will cause serious traffic congestion.
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, the
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should be considerate. He
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she should not always ask the
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to
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overtime. The
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are
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was
is
already very tired after a long day of
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and they don’t have much energy to
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for extra hours. If they still continue to
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, they can’t easily concentrate and the
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efficiency is much
lowered
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lower
. They may
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make many mistakes while they are working. The
boss
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should not always ask them to go back to the
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when they are having holidays as they have to restore their energy after working for a whole week.
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, if the
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have
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has
to
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on some kind of projects, the
boss
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should not force them to finish them in a short period of time. He
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she should give sufficient time to them to
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on it,
otherwise
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the
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may finish the projects
.
Accept space
.
Apart from being considerate, the
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should be fair to all
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. He
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she should not be partial to someone. It is very unfair to the other
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. They would be very angry and will not
work
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for you wholeheartedly. The
boss
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should equally
allocated
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allocate
the
work
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to each
staff
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. The workload of each
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should not be too heavy. If there are not enough staffs in the
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, the
boss
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should ask more
staff
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to help. All in all, it is very important to be a good
boss
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. The
boss
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should communicate more with the
staff
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and they will have
better understanding
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a better understanding
between one another
.
Accept space
.
If the
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is a good one, all the
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would respect him
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her. They would be happier while working and a sense of belonging is
also
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developed towards the
office
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.
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