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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

#rubbish #governments #amount
Nowadays, we ,
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Nowadays, we
 humans, are creating more waste through various means and it is getting increase day by day. Important of them are going to be discussed below. As mentioned above,
couple
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the couple
a couple
couples
 are high priority and they are household and industries. Let us see how and what are they producing. Wastage from family are generally left over food and non recycle items. As most of the parents are job holders they hardly find time to cook, so
then
 tend to get their lunch or dinner from outside.Coming to Factories,
outcome
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the outcome
from
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of
 these, after goods are manufactured, are highly dangerous and harmful to both humans and
environment
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the environment
.
For example
, chemicals that are released to
sea
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the sea
 and gases into
air
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the air
. The government should impose taxes or charge
for
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of
 collecting their garbage.
This
 is one of the
way
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ways
 to reduce the waste that are
creating
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created
 from houses. Regarding factories,
official
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officials
 should have
an
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a
through
painstakingly careful and accurate
thorough
 check of
released
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releasing
 chemical's in order to ensure that they are not more than the limit they are permitted. In conclusion, it's not only the responsibility of the ruling party, but
also
 each individual that
need
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needs
 to take care of.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • disposable culture
  • over-packaging
  • non-recyclable
  • public awareness
  • waste management
  • environmental impact
  • recycle
  • recycling facilities
  • waste separation
  • single-use products
  • infrastructure
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