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Should young people follow older people's example or its good for them to challenge the older people's thoughts and opinions. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

#people #challenge #thoughts
It is
belived
accept as true; take to be true
believed
 that experience comes with the age. Elderly people have lots of experience and want to guide
the young
Suggestion
the younger
 generation for their brighter future. Some youngsters challenge the opinions given by elders while others follow them.
This
 essay will discuss why
challanging
requiring full use of your abilities or resources
challenging
 the opinion from elder people is advantageous but why following them is ultimately superior. Undoubtedly elder people have more experience in their
life
 compared to the young one's,
nevertheless
, guiding them on each phase will ultimately result in poor
decision
 making capability.
Challanging
Suggestion
Challenging
 elder people is important,
else
to the same degree (often followed by 'as')
as
 they will not be able to make
correct choice
Suggestion
the correct choice
a correct choice
 for themselves.
For example
, if a 16 year old youngster encounters an accident in front of his
eyes
Accept comma addition
eyes, then
then
 we cannot expect from him to call his elderly for their opinion.
Thus
, it is of utmost importance to take the
decision
instead
 of running for the help.
Furthermore
, with the change in time, the technology, the environment and the ways of living the
life
 changes.
Their
Suggestion
There
 is a
possiblity
a future prospect or potential
possibility
 that whatever
decision
 they made in the past will have the same impact
in
Suggestion
on
present
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the present
.
Conversely
, during important decisions we should ask for the opinion from our elders. In
life
 changing decisions like marriage, divorce or pregnancy, it is our who can guide us the best and show us the brighter side. They have already taken tough decisions in their
life-span
the period during which something is functional (as between birth and death)
lifespan
 and would not like us to suffer the same. So, it is our responsibility to learn from them. To conclude, we should listen to the experiences of
elder
advanced in years; ('aged' is pronounced as two syllables)
older
 people and take the learnings as it will prevent us from taking the wrong decisions. We should include them in
big decisions
Suggestion
the big decisions
 of
life
,
however
, taking small decisions by ourselves will build the
decision
 making capability.
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