School children are becoming far too dependent on computers. This is having an alarming effect on reading and writing skills. Teachers need to avoid using computers in the classroom at all costs and go back to teaching basic study skills. Do you agree or disagree?

Owing to the widespread of technology.Many students become
luck skilled
Accept comma addition
luck, skilled
like skilled
in reading and writing due to their depend on
this
technology
such
as computers.Some people think that schools and teachers need to stop using any of
this technologies
Suggestion
these technologies
this technology
and to back to the old teaching
mathods
a way of doing something, especially a systematic way; implies an orderly logical arrangement (usually in steps)
methods
.I partly agree with
this
idea
,
Accept space
,
I think that
this
new way of teaching can have an advantages as well as
disadvantges
the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position
disadvantages
disadvantage
. On the one hand.Using computers can be beneficial.In the developed countries using
this ways
Suggestion
this way
these ways
is necessary for the students benefit.The skills they
learen
gain knowledge or skills
learn
at the school can be
importan
of great significance or value
important
for their future.
For example
, it is
essintal
absolutely necessary; vitally necessary
essential
for to have a
computiers
a machine for performing calculations automatically
computer
computers
computerized
skill to find a good job.
Moreover
, it
is become
Suggestion
has become
is becoming
becomes
is to become
one of the main required for companies.
On the other hand
.
This
major
depened
be contingent upon (something that is elided)
depend
depends
depended
on
this
plural of "this"
these
those
computers had
have
Suggestion
had
a bad effect on students.
As a result
,
Their
in or at that place
there
There
is some believe that students become
week
wanting in physical strength
weak
in reading and writing because of the intensive use
for
Suggestion
of
this
computers
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computer
in all classes.
For instance
,
their
in or at that place
there
is a recent study showed that many students have faced a real problem in terms of reading
and writing which,
Suggestion
and writing, which
lead to the fact that
this
method can have a possible negative effect on the students basic skills.
in
Suggestion
In
conclusion. Using computers in education cannot be considered as the best way for teaching.
However
, a better way to teach the students it is by
makeing
the act that results in something coming to be
making
a balance between both
coputers
a machine for performing calculations automatically
computers
chapters
and basic study skills.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Reliance
  • Literacy skills
  • Handwriting
  • Cognitive development
  • Memory retention
  • Digital engagement
  • Tactile experience
  • Enhance
  • Diversify
  • Balanced skill set
  • Traditional teaching methods
  • Digital literacy
  • Extracurricular activities
  • Reading comprehension
  • Critical thinking
  • Technological proficiency
  • Educational technology
  • Foundational skills
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