Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Businesses should do anything they can to make a profit. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

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All most people are really interested in doing
business
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basically because
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is a challenging and wealthy career. In order to run a
business
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, remaining the profitability is an important part deciding the
company
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survival
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survives
survived
survive
.
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, some people raise the question that should all
company
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will pay any cost to make
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profit
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a profit
. Personally, I understand the immense role of
profit
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through I disagree with the idea that
business
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could do anything to gain benefit because of the
government
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law and long term running.
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, there are a lot of reasons the
government
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of each country
implement
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implements
strict laws for
business
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. Indeed,
business
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have
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has
to follow the rule if not they will be
punish
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punished
or even be banned.
Those
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These
laws not only ensure the
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budget to support the social
activities but
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activities, but
also
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protect the fair square for all
business
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to run.
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, Employee Code of Conduct is an international law, protecting the right of
workers which
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workers, which
all most
company
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have to observe. In which
company
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have
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has
responsibility
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a responsibility
the responsibility
to pay salary fitting with the work which employee is in charge of. If any
company
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is
suspect
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suspected
of violating the rule, the
government
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will interfere.
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, in order to run
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company
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a company
the company
companies
in a long-term process, it is important to take care of customer trust. Companies only consider about
profit
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would
creating
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create
low quality products which hurt customer benefit.
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, the client no longer wants to buy that product any more that would lead
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company
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the company
companies
to the edge of
bankrupt
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bankruptcy
.
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, in my country,
Chinsu
a native or inhabitant of Communist China or of Nationalist China
Chinese
chainsaw
is one of the popular fish sauces.
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, after the media publishes the unhealthy chemical ingredient of
Chinsu
a native or inhabitant of Communist China or of Nationalist China
Chinese
products.
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that, people said that they changed from old ingredient to that poor once with
the lower
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the lowest
price to increase
profit
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.
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,
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,
people
stated
take the first step or steps in carrying out an action
started
to refuse to buy their products.
This
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is the reason why three months latter
Chinsu
a native or inhabitant of Communist China or of Nationalist China
Chinese
have do filed
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have filed
file
for bankruptcy. In short, I agree that
profit
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is one of the important
target
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targets
of
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business but
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business, but
doing anything to reach that target is not a good idea. Companies need to follow the
government
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’s law to ensure their
business
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run smoothly.
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, to operate
business
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in a long path,
besides
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profitability,
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company
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the company
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also need
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also needs
to care about the customer benefits.
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