Some people enjoy change, and they look forward to new experiences. Others like their lives to stay the same, and they do not change their usual habits. Compare these two approaches to life. Which approach do you prefer? Explain why.

There are various tendencies in the way people encounter problems. Some people appreciate adjustments and they contemplate to different
aquainstances
personal knowledge or information about someone or something
acquaintances
. While others
takes
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take
are taking
have taken
satisfaction in making
thier
of them or themselves
their
activities in the same manner and do not to shift. In
this
essay,
iam
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
am
going to discuss both sides of
argument
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the argument
an argument
arguments
and represent my opinion.
To begin
with, the idea of confronting new experiences is quite attractive for two main reasons.
First
, a new awareness can only be achieved by undergoing new advances. To become the best in the fields which people expect to work, they have to be challenged with different and new questions or situations. By training with
this
method, people will improve their ability to solve problems more wisely and quickly. One illustration of
this
is that if people want to be a scientist who can invent something modern, they should be able to adjust and take full advantage of modification to
finally
base on it and create inventions.
Second
, being entertained with changes is
also
an ideal way to enjoy life. If
people
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peoples'
activities would repeated continuously they feel get
boared
tired of the world
bored
with out
in absence of
without
any inspiration.
Therefore
, modifications
is
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are
key to solve
this
issue because it will help people to find new
opertunities
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
to overcome obstacles and to enjoy diverse and beautiful factors.
However
the public who
are
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is
fond static lives does not show
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
persuasive arguments. It goes with saying that life
with out
in absence of
without
or little changes are really peaceful and safe.
in
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In
other words, these people avoid facing difficulties and risks; they do not want
to spent
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to spend
their
lifes
a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
with worries and plans.
For instance
, normal employee
often choose
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often chooses
to do boring job, with high salary
instead
of living in their
favourate
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
favoured
fields but just can get a living
wages
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wage
.
Besides
, a durable life style will
proctects
shield from danger, injury, destruction, or damage
protects
protect
people's health efficiently because these ones often look at the problems with
unintresting
arousing no interest or attention or curiosity or excitement
uninteresting
eyes, so they intended to concentrate on with a great deal of doing and time.
Hence
their energy can be
uneffected
undergoing no change when acted upon
unaffected
infected
. To sum up, both sides have
thier
of them or themselves
their
valid reasons, but
iam
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are
am
in favour of positive
of
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about
change as it is
main reason
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the main reason
a main reason
for human
evaluation
a process in which something passes by degrees to a different stage (especially a more advanced or mature stage)
evolution
.
With out
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Without
change people could not break their limit to acquire more knowledge and
thus
the society would not be able to refine and general public might be
face
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facing
faced
upto
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up to
unsolved issues.
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