Some people enjoy change, and they look forward to new experiences. Others like their lives to stay the same, and they do not change their usual habits. Compare these two approaches to life. Which approach do you prefer? Explain why.

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There are various tendencies in the way people encounter problems. Some people appreciate adjustments and they contemplate to different

aquainstances

personal knowledge or information about someone or something

acquaintances

. While others

takes

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take

are taking

have taken

satisfaction in making

thier

of them or themselves

their

activities in the same manner and do not to shift. In

this

essay,

iam

have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)

going to discuss both sides of

argument

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the argument

an argument

arguments

and represent my opinion.

To begin

with, the idea of confronting new experiences is quite attractive for two main reasons.

First

, a new awareness can only be achieved by undergoing new advances. To become the best in the fields which people expect to work, they have to be challenged with different and new questions or situations. By training with

this

method, people will improve their ability to solve problems more wisely and quickly. One illustration of

this

is that if people want to be a scientist who can invent something modern, they should be able to adjust and take full advantage of modification to

finally

base on it and create inventions.

Second

, being entertained with changes is

also

an ideal way to enjoy life. If

people

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peoples'

activities would repeated continuously they feel get

boared

tired of the world

bored

with out

in absence of

without

any inspiration.

Therefore

, modifications

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are

key to solve

this

issue because it will help people to find new

opertunities

a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances

opportunities

to overcome obstacles and to enjoy diverse and beautiful factors.

However

the public who

are

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fond static lives does not show

some

one or some or every or all without specification

any

persuasive arguments. It goes with saying that life

with out

in absence of

without

or little changes are really peaceful and safe.

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other words, these people avoid facing difficulties and risks; they do not want

to spent

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to spend

their

lifes

a characteristic state or mode of living

lives

with worries and plans.

For instance

, normal employee

often choose

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often chooses

to do boring job, with high salary

instead

of living in their

favourate

something regarded with special favor or liking

favourite

favoured

fields but just can get a living

wages

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wage

Besides

, a durable life style will

proctects

shield from danger, injury, destruction, or damage

protects

protect

people's health efficiently because these ones often look at the problems with

unintresting

arousing no interest or attention or curiosity or excitement

uninteresting

eyes, so they intended to concentrate on with a great deal of doing and time.

Hence

their energy can be

uneffected

undergoing no change when acted upon

unaffected

infected

. To sum up, both sides have

thier

of them or themselves

their

valid reasons, but

iam

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are

in favour of positive

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about

change as it is

main reason

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the main reason

a main reason

for human

evaluation

a process in which something passes by degrees to a different stage (especially a more advanced or mature stage)

evolution

With out

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Without

change people could not break their limit to acquire more knowledge and

thus

the society would not be able to refine and general public might be

face

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facing

faced

upto

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up to

unsolved issues.

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