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The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table displays forested
land
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 of several world
regions
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 in millions of
hectares
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.
In
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, from 1990 to 2005, there is a slight decrease in
areas
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 of
land
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 covered by forests
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 five
regions
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: Africa, North
America
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, Oceania, and South
America
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, except for Europe and Asia. Among the six
regions
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, Europe is the one owning the largest forest
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areas
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area
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 of over 1 billion
hectares
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 during 1990-2005. Ranking
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second
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is
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in
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 South
America
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, with about 900 million
hectares
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 during the same period and the
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 is North
America
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 with approximately 700 million
hectares
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. Owning the smallest forested
land
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areas
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area
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 (less than 200 million
hectares
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) is Oceania. On observing all three years 1990, 2000, and 2005, one can see
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 similar decrease in forested
land
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areas
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 happened in 4
regions
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 Africa, North
America
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, Oceania and South
America
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.
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, the decrease at the beginning of the 21st century is smaller than
the
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 end of the 20th century.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words land, regions, hectares, areas, america with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
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