Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is considered by some that teacher should stop giving homework to their students.
while
(often used as a combining form) in a good or proper or satisfactory manner or to a high standard ('good' is a nonstandard dialectal variant for 'well')
Well
While
, there are others who think that homeworks are necessary for the education system.In my opinion, I disagree with the idea of fully stopping
this
homeworkes
preparatory school work done outside school (especially at home)
homework
homeworks
.As well as, I think reducing the amount of
homeworkes
preparatory school work done outside school (especially at home)
homework
homeworks
could be beneficial. On the one hand.There
is
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are
people who think that preventing homeworks is the best for the education.Students will have more time to spend on things they like as
plying
the act of playing a musical instrument
playing
out with
there
of them or themselves
their
friends.
Moreover
,
this
homeworks can have a damage effect on
childeren
a young person of either sex
children
.
For example
, many
childeren
a young person of either sex
children
are under pressure due to the number of homeworks that they have to finish at the end of the day.
As a result
,
their
in or at that place
there
is no need for
this
homeworks.
student
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The student
Student
A student
are learning
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is learning
enough at the school.
On the other hand
.Other people believe that student cannot learn without doing
this homeworks
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these homeworks
.Indeed, many teachers have seen
this
method as the best way for the education.
For instance
, during the years there was a researches by teachers about the best method to teach their students.Many of them claimed that giving homeworks have a great effect on the students
,
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,
They learn much more by
this
way than any other ways. In conclusion.
personally
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Personally
, I agree that homeworks are
important but
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important, but
also
, the student need to have a free time to do what they like. Many homeworks will lead to a negative impact, by making a balance
this
homeworks can be nothing but a helpful.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Instills discipline
  • Deepen understanding
  • Independent learning
  • Reinforcement
  • Parental involvement
  • Curriculum insight
  • Burnout
  • Student stress
  • Leisure time
  • Relevance of assignments
  • Project-based learning
  • Interactive learning
  • Individual learning styles
  • Conducive study environment
  • Homework policy
  • Balanced approach
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