More and more businesses as well individuals are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially using technology rather than being face to face.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating.

It is an undeniable truth that globe is unimaginable without technology.
Infact
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In fact
technology is omnipresent.
Although
, online communication is a good source of
time
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timely
saving
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saving, however
however
,
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,
it is difficult to
built
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build
a strong relationship since internet is only a virtual life.I would elucidate merits and demerits of online conservation in
upcoming paragraphs
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the upcoming paragraphs
. Using technology for communicating has myriad merits.The
first
and predominant one is it accelerates the flow of information between
two distances
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the two distances
.
In other
words people
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words, people
who live far from their home can keep in touch with lovely ones by making a call or sending a message.
Moreover nowadays
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Moreover, nowadays
people are very busy to earn daily bread and butter.
That is
why they have rarely chance to travel and get-together with
friends
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friends, however
however
,
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,
they still can interact with people they want in just one click.
On the other hand
,
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,
no one can deny the demerits of online communication.The major adverse it has is
security issue
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a security issue
.
For
example since
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example, since
the entire communication is online
,
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,
it is quite possible that someone hack personal account and steal the important passwords and information.
In addition
, people can be easily distracted if they are constantly chatting online.I would
qoute
make reference to
cite
the example of office workers.Like people who used social media tend to be lesser effective than those who avoided their use during work. To conclude
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,
I recapitulate that no
dbout
a discussion in which reasons are advanced for and against some proposition or proposal
debate
debt
devout
going online for conservation
save
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saves
time and
money but
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money, but
by more and more use of online chatting people can easily
distracted
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distract
and facing the problem of weak eyesight.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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  • Efficiency
  • Convenience
  • Instant messaging
  • Video calls
  • Cost-effectiveness
  • Economical
  • Accessibility
  • Physical barriers
  • Nuanced understanding
  • Impersonal
  • Misunderstandings
  • Reliance
  • Technical failures
  • Vulnerable
  • Security breaches
  • Hacking
  • Data theft
  • Sensitive information
  • Digital communication
  • Face-to-face interactions
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