Childern have more and more tests and exams to do at school, sometime starting until the age of five or six, right up until the age of eighteen. What are the advantages and disadvantages of making childern do exams?

Nowadays,
childern
a young person of either sex
children
are being examined on
regular basis
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a regular basis
since
very early age
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a very early age
, not only they are evaluated in
exams but
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exams, but
on
day
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a day
to day basis in
form
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the form
of quiz, class participations and presentation.
However
, is it beneficial or has some drawback? In
this
essay, I will explore the pros and cons of examination from the early grades to higher grades. I will start by looking at advantages,
firstly
, examinations are considered to be the best way to prepare youngsters to face the challenges in upcoming life.
Moreover
, it significantly helps to improve their confidence and self dependency.
Furthermore
,
childern
a young person of either sex
children
get an opportunity to overcome on mistakes if they are being evaluated since the early age, it helps them to rectify their shortfalls and to learn and compete gradually.
For instance
, a child learns time management, decision making and situation analysis skills which help him throughout his life, especially, once he takes his professional and practical move.
On the other hand
, it causes some drawbacks, the only age bracket when one can enjoy as a free soul get ruined, a child loses his carefree
atitude
a complex mental state involving beliefs and feelings and values and dispositions to act in certain ways
attitude
attitudes
in order to get grades and be in the competition. Unfortunately, he is forced to behave like
adult
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adults
an adult
and be result
oriented which
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oriented, which
ultimately snatches his childhood.
In addition
to
this
, it tends to increase the stress level of an innocent soul when he has to
apprear
give a certain impression or have a certain outward aspect
appear
in midterm and final term
erams
weapons considered collectively
arms
every after
few months
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a few months
. Which leads depression and anxiety and because cause of extreme reactions including, suicidal attempts and others. To conclude, there are both positive and negative
impact
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impacts
of
examinationon
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examination of
examination on
young people aged between 5 to 18. Many people find it an effective and most practicing
way
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ways
in the
world  but
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world, but
personally I believe, it is rather important to let them be a free soul, they should get an opportunity to enjoy their early stage of life because getting
education
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an education
is not a competition.
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  • assessment
  • knowledge
  • understanding
  • discipline
  • time management
  • academic
  • professional
  • achievement
  • motivation
  • improvement
  • stress
  • anxiety
  • focus
  • education
  • creativity
  • independent thinking
  • self-esteem
  • confidence
  • ability
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